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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A teacher’s ability to relate well with students is more important thanexcellent knowledge of the subject being taught. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.837

A teacher’s ability to relate well with students is more important thanexcellent knowledge of the subject being taught. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 837
There is no shortage of debate about if teacher with better relationship with their students or better knwoledge is a better educator. Without a question, many would think that a teacher with great knowledge would provide the best classes; other may consider the opposite point of view. As far as I am concerned, I strongly believe that a teacher with a great relationship with their students can teach more effectibly than onother with better knowledge, but a bad personal connection with their students. I feel this way mainly for two reasons I will explore in the following essay. First of all, a teacher who has a good relationship with their student usually find a better reception of the information the teacher is bringing to the class; ergo, the students learns better. Moreover, the students' predisposition, towards a person that they respect and like, creates a positive environment for learning. My own personal experience is a compelling example of this point. When I was a elementary student, I used to be very shy and approaching to a teacher to ask something was not in my list. As a result, I struggled with my grades till I we had a new teacher whose personality allowed all the student to feel comfortable and open in class. Therefore, I could ask her all the questions I needed to understand any subject or topic she was teaching; and in consequence, my grades improved considerably. Secondly, a teacher with excellent knowledge is no necessarily a synonym of an excellent educator. Moreover, the teacher' s communication and social skills usually are the key for achieving an excellent teaching. To illustrate this point let' s consider the following example. My daughter is an excellent student, but as her mother she also is very shy and she always struggle to approach to her teacher in case she needs some help from them. Instead, she creates an interesting group of study with her peers at class. Therefore, between peers and friend she can ask and learn what she missed in class. In other words, none of her friends or peer would have deeper knowledge than the teachers, however the great personal connection between them provide the right communication and respect for a good learning. In conclusion, I deeply agree with the statement provides by the thesis: the relationship teacher-student is more important than the teacher' s knowledge for being a better educator. This is because a good relationship would provide a better reception for the student to learn, and also because the teacher would achieve a better communication and interaction with the students in a more effectively way.
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the best
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relationship
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students
can teach more
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effectibly
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with
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knowledge
,
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personal connection with their
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students
. I feel this way
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for two reasons I will explore in the following essay.

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reception of the information the
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is bringing to the
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; ergo, the
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learns
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.
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environment for learning. My
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personal experience is a compelling example of this point. When I was
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, I
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used
to be
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very
shy and approaching to a
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to ask something was not in my list.
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, I struggled with my grades till I we had a new
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teacher
whose personality
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allowed
all the
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student
to feel comfortable and open in
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class
.
Therefore
, I could ask her all the questions I needed to understand any subject or topic she was teaching; and in consequence, my grades
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improved
considerably
.

Secondly
, a
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teacher
with
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excellent
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knowledge
is no
necessarily
a synonym of an
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excellent
educator.
Moreover
, the
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the key for achieving an
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teaching. To illustrate this point
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,
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as her mother she
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is
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in case she needs
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help
from them.
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, she creates an interesting group of study with her peers at
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class
.
Therefore
, between peers and friend she can ask and learn what she missed in
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class
.
In other words
, none of her friends or peer would have deeper
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knowledge
than the
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,
however
the great personal
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connection between
them
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the right communication and respect for a
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good
learning.

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, I
deeply
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with the statement
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by the thesis: the
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teacher-student is more
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than the
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knowledge
for being a
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educator. This is
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good
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relationship
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provide
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reception for the
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student
to learn, and
also
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the
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would achieve a
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better
communication and interaction with the
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students
in a more
effectively
way.
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52Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay A teacher’s ability to relate well with students is more important thanexcellent knowledge of the subject being taught. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 837

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
438 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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