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do you agree or disagree with the following statement. it is better to finish a project completely and then begin another project than to work on two or more projects at the same time? you specific reasons and examples to support your answer v.835

it is better to finish a project completely and then begin another project than to work on two or more projects at the same time? you specific reasons and examples to support your answer v. 835
The essential question of the prompt of the question is about whether it better to finish a project completely and then begin a new one or work on two two projects at the same time. Certainly, some people, if asked, would agree to work on two or more projects at the same time to save money and time, while others would say that the question is double-edged due to a great deal of factors involved. As far as I am concerned, I agree that it is better to finish a product completely and then start work on another one. The basis for my views will be discusse in the following essay. There is no doubt that some of the projects required a precise work and effort. A single mistake can ruin the project reputation if caution are not in effect. For example, in order to asseret that all cars produced are safe and reliable, Toyota car company gives each employee a single project at a time. Not only that but also give them the time needed to finish their project. Thus, this allow the employees to focus only on their project and make sure that the end of the project part is compatible with the standered. In other words, if the workers were busy with more than one task, they could losses their focus, make mistakes or produce low quality cars. Thus, this could significantly affect the company reputation and sales, In addition to the previous point, working in more than one project could be deadly. A small mistake in medcation preparation could pose the patient to a great risk. For instance, Pharmacist who are involved in prescription preparation, tablet counts and patient counseling are required to double check every stap in the drug preparation process in to ensure patient safety. If they are distureped by different activities at the same time, like answering phone calls or handling cash regestered, they are more likely make mistakes that could have a great negative impact on their patients. Implement one project policy could lessen number of mistakes and ensure patient safety. As a conclusion, we can safely say that even though that working on one project can be costly and time consuming, working on one project is better because it can prevent damage that may occur due to inability to focus on more than one project.
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project
completely and then
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begin
a new one or
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work
on
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two two
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projects
at the same
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time
.
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,
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some
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people
, if asked, would
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agree
to
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work
on two or more
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projects
at the same
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time
to save money and
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time
, while others would say that the question is double-edged due to a great deal of factors involved. As far as I
am concerned
, I
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agree
that it is better to finish a product completely and then
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start
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work
on another one. The basis for my views will be
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discusse
in the following essay.

There is no doubt that
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some of the
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projects
required a precise
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work
and effort. A single
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mistake
can ruin the
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project
reputation if caution are not in effect.
For example
, in order to
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asseret
that all cars produced are safe and reliable, Toyota car
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company
gives each employee a single
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project
at a
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time
. Not
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only
that
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but
also
give them the
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time
needed to finish their
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project
.
Thus
, this
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allow
the employees to focus
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only
on their
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project
and
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make
sure that the
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end
of the
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part is compatible with the
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standered
.
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, if the workers were busy with more than one task, they
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could losses
their focus,
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make
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mistakes
or produce low quality cars.
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, this could
significantly
affect the
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company
reputation and sales,

In addition
to the previous point, working in more than one
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project
could be deadly. A
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small
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mistake
in
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medcation
preparation could pose the
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patient
to a great
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risk
.
For instance
, Pharmacist who
are involved
in prescription preparation, tablet counts and
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patient
counseling
are required
to double
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check
every
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stap
in the drug preparation process in to ensure
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patient
safety. If they are
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distureped
by
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different
activities at the same
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time
, like answering phone calls or handling cash
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regestered
, they are more likely
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make
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mistakes
that could have a great
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negative
impact on their
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patients
. Implement one
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project
policy could lessen number of
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mistakes
and ensure
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patient
safety.

As a conclusion, we can
safely
say that
even though
that working on one
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project
can be costly and
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time consuming
, working on one
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project
is better
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because
it can
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prevent
damage that may occur due to inability to focus on more than one
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project
.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
35Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Mistakes

IELTS essay it is better to finish a project completely and then begin another project than to work on two or more projects at the same time? you specific reasons and examples to support your answer v. 835

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
394 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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