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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A student must like a teacher in order to learn from the teacher. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. v.831

A student must like a teacher in order to learn from the teacher. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. v. 831
Teachers not only provide the knowledge but also the real experiences of life and in order to gain such information, some people believe that student should share the similar characteristics and mindset of his teacher. I believe that notion is correct and I shall explain why I agree with the above statement. Many problems could arise if teacher and student have opposite personalities and different thought processes. Firstly, there would always be a communication gap between both and this may lead to hostility towards teacher. For example, when I was in school, I found that some of the students never had any interest in math subject and also failed in the math subject and later on attributed this failure to math teacher teaching style. Secondly, having different mindset prompt student not to follow the teachers, consequently teacher get demotivated and stop putting efforts in educate the students. However, both disciple and teacher will be benefited provided they have common qualities. To begin with, teacher’s main job is to provide education but other than that they possess many other qualities such as leadership, effective speaking and so on. If student and teacher have cordial relationship then teacher may also guide to develop other skills which could be useful when student enter in university or job. For instance, Indian caption M. S Dhoni said in an interview that his primary teacher honed the skills in cricket and he owes lot to his teacher. Furthermore, it is also seen that teacher helps their student in job recommendation, admission for higher education etc. To conclude, Teacher is considered as one of key person in one’s life as his guidance can change the life of pupils. It is always to good follow the teacher and value his qualities so that utmost knowledge and experience can be learned.
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Teachers
not
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only
provide the knowledge
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but
also
the real experiences of life and in order to gain such information,
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some
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people
believe that
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student
should share the similar characteristics and mindset of his
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teacher
. I believe that notion is correct and I shall
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explain
why I
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agree
with the above statement.

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Many
problems could arise if
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teacher
and
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student
have opposite personalities and
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different
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thought
processes.
Firstly
, there would always be a communication gap between both and this may lead to hostility towards
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teacher
.
For example
, when I was in school, I found that
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some of the
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students
never had any interest in math subject and
also
failed in the math subject and later on attributed this failure to math
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teacher
teaching style.
Secondly
, having
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different
mindset prompt
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student
not to follow the
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teachers
,
consequently
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teacher
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get
demotivated and
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stop
putting efforts in educate the students.

However
, both disciple and
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teacher
will
be benefited
provided they have common qualities. To
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begin
with,
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teacher’s
main job is to provide education
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but
other than that they possess
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many
other qualities such as leadership, effective speaking and
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so
on. If
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student
and
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teacher
have cordial relationship then
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teacher
may
also
guide to develop other
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skills
which could be useful when
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student
enter in university or job.
For instance
, Indian caption M. S
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Dhoni
said in an interview that his primary
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teacher
honed the
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skills
in
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cricket and
he owes lot to his
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teacher
.
Furthermore
, it is
also
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seen
that
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teacher
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helps
their
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student
in job recommendation, admission for higher education etc.

To conclude
,
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Teacher
is considered
as one of key person in one’s life as his guidance can
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change
the life of pupils. It is always to
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good
follow the
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teacher
and value his qualities
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so
that utmost knowledge and experience can
be learned
.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay A student must like a teacher in order to learn from the teacher. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. v. 831

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
302 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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