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do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have lots of different friends than it is to have just a few friends. v.822

It is better to have lots of different friends than it is to have just a few friends. v. 822
“friendship” means having a good relationship with somebody you like. In today’s world it is very difficult to find good and trustworthy friends. In my opinion Having lots of several friends are much better than having few because of three reasons which I am going to explain in the following essays. The First reason is You can learn plenty of new things for example, in 2013 when I travel to India, it was my first time going to a different country with change in language, culture, religious, colour and many more. My Indian friends helped me to learn their languages as well as English the common language. Similarly, they taught several new cultures which was very excited to me. Furthermore, they showed me their masjid, temple as well as church that I have never seen in my country. The Second reason is they can help you out in varieties of problems such as, in school or college they can help you with studies likewise in job or any other work place. For example, I had many problems in studies due to change in language while studying in Indian college, they helped me to be a diligence student and over come to my problems. They were always supportive and never left me behind even though I was from different country. The third reason, you never feel alone with Having more number of friends. You can always enjoy with them by going out to playing ground or clubs as well as long trip to different city or country as a purpose of vocations. In brief, having lots of different friends are better in case of friends as a teacher, standing with you in all problems and spending good time whenever feel alone.
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friendship
” means
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having
a
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good
relationship with somebody you like. In
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today
’s world it is
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very
difficult to find
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good
and trustworthy
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friends
. In my opinion
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Having
lots of several
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friends
are much better than
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having
few
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because
of three
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reasons
which I am going to
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explain
in the following essays.

The
First
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reason
is You can learn
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plenty
of new things
for example
, in 2013 when I travel to India, it was my
first
time going to a
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different
country with
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change
in
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language
, culture, religious,
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colour
and
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many
more. My Indian
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friends
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helped
me to learn their
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languages
as well
as English the common
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language
.
Similarly
, they taught several new cultures which was
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very
excited to me.
Furthermore
, they
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showed
me their
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masjid
, temple
as well
as church that I have never
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seen
in my country.

The Second
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reason
is they can
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help
you out in varieties of
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problems
such as, in school or college they can
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help
you with studies
likewise
in job or any other work place.
For example
, I had
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many
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problems
in studies due to
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change
in
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language
while studying in Indian college, they
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helped
me to be a diligence student and over
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come
to my
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problems
. They were always supportive and never
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left
me behind
even though
I was from
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different
country.

The third
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reason
, you never feel alone with
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Having
more number of
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friends
. You can always enjoy with them by going out to playing ground or clubs
as well
as long trip to
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different
city or country as a purpose of vocations.

In brief
,
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having
lots of
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different
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friends
are better in case of
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friends
as a teacher, standing with you in all
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problems
and spending
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good
time whenever feel alone.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
To learn a language is to have one more window from which to look at the world.
Chinese Proverb

IELTS essay It is better to have lots of different friends than it is to have just a few friends. v. 822

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
290 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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