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It is the duty of international community to check all nations whether they are using fossil fuels in limited amount what extent do you agree or disagree? Relevant example and reason v.2

It is the duty of international community to check all nations whether they are using fossil fuels in limited amount what extent Relevant example and reason v. 2
It is argued that, it is responsibility of foreigner- leadership to evaluate all countries that whether, they are exhausted to non- renewable resources in a little quantity. I strongly agree this statement because, it has been lead to pollution as well as increasing ailment for mankind life. At first glance, pollution is highly worse impact on environment to consumed a ton of fossil fuels in daily life such as coal, petroleum and so on. Moreover, a fossil fuels were consumed to vehicles which is upsurge utilise pollutant particles in the habitat. To illustrate; the researcher found that coal is used in making bricks and thermal plant chimneys for produce electricity so that, non- renewable resources 74% plummet pollutant particles in the environment. In addition to this, the ailment increase in around us by fossil fuels. Furthermore, the non- renewable resources emitted a lot of hazardous gases in the atmosphere and overcome oxygen in the surrounding. The best epitome of this is the Hindustan time was conducted survey a large amount of coal and petroleum were incline cardiac vascular ( heart beat) and higher blood pressure diseases. It was counted ten out of 8 people suffered from diseases. To conclude, I believe that duties of international membership to check nations which is hard go limited fossil fuels so I agree that, this argument is true. Due to this reason, for that health issues and environment problems.
It
is argued
that, it is responsibility of foreigner- leadership to evaluate all countries that whether, they
are exhausted
to non- renewable resources in a
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little
quantity. I
strongly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
this statement
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because
, it has been lead to pollution
as well
as increasing ailment for mankind life.

At
first
glance, pollution is
The extreme adjective for bad is "awful", "terrible", "evil" or "horrible".
highly worse
impact on environment
Did you mean "to consume"?
to consumed
a ton of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fossil
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fuels
in daily life such as coal, petroleum and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
on.
Moreover
, a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fossil
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fuels
were consumed
to vehicles which is upsurge
Possible spelling mistake. 'utilise' is British English.
utilise
pollutant particles in the habitat. To illustrate; the researcher found that coal is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
in making bricks and thermal plant chimneys for produce electricity
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that, non- renewable resources 74% plummet pollutant particles in the environment.

In addition
to this, the ailment increase in around us by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fossil
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fuels
.
Furthermore
, the non- renewable resources emitted
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
hazardous gases in the atmosphere and overcome oxygen in the surrounding. The best epitome of this is the Hindustan time
was conducted
survey a large amount of coal and petroleum were
Consider using a past participle here: "inclined".
incline
cardiac vascular
Don't put a space after the opening parenthesis
(
heart beat) and higher blood pressure diseases. It
was counted
ten out of 8
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
suffered from diseases.

To conclude
, I believe that duties of international membership to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
nations which is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
go limited
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fossil
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fuels
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
that, this argument is true. Due to this reason, for that health issues and environment problems.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS essay It is the duty of international community to check all nations whether they are using fossil fuels in limited amount what extent Relevant example and reason v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
235 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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