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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is easier to keep old friends than it is to make new friends. v.808

It is easier to keep old friends than it is to make new friends. v. 808
Friends are important part of our live. Friendship is beautiful relationship between two person with the bond of love, trust and care. Friendship do not depends on whether the person is our old friend or a new friend, but it depends upon contribution of care of two people to relationship. Some may believe that it is easier to keep old friends rather than new friends. But I believe that, making new friends add new prospective and new experience in to our life. First, to keep friendship alive, it is very necessary to keep in touch. Nowadays, we can see that lots of people moved from one place to other place for variety of reasons. So it becomes hard to maintain long distance relationship between friends. Although, advance in technology created social networking sits such as FACEBOOK AND TWITTER, which helps to keep in touch with our friends and family, but daily work and life makes person that busy that he does not get time to contact old friend through social networking sites. In long run, old friends become vanish from list. However, new friends are one who give us company in new environment. It is not always true that new friends harm us. For example, when I moved to California from New Jersey. I missed my old friends and I used to massage them daily but as the time passed, my old friends stopped massaging me and I felt so bad that they forget me. But in few months I made one new friend named " Pari" , who is same as me, we both like to do adventure things, which made us not only good but best friends forever. So sometimes new friends also become part of our life without any problem. Secondly, making a new friend, would add new experience in our life. Although old friends know about our good and bad things but habits will change time to time, so old friends are no longer familiar with our new habits and nature. Furthermore, new friends know everything about us and they become so important for us that we can not imagine life without them. Besides, friendship experience of new friends are totally different, as we do not know everything about each other as like an old friend. For instance, when I was in college, one of my new friends is from India. I usually heard her talking in her native language " Hindi" to her parents on phone. I was very passionate about to learn new language, and I learnt " Hindi" language from her. So old friends are important but making new friends is always having a new experience. Finally, old friends know about our proc and cons, so they may be take an advantage of us. While we are not completely open book to new friends. So we do not have to worry about being cheated or hurt. A little talk with a new friends also help us even though we never seen each other in person, such as friends from social networking sites.
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Friends
are
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important
part of our
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live
.
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Friendship
is
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beautiful
relationship between two
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person
with the bond of
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love
, trust and care.
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Friendship
do not
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depends
on whether the
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person
is our
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old
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friend
or a
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new
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friend
,
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but
it depends upon contribution of care of two
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people
to relationship.
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Some
may
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believe
that it is easier to
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keep
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old
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friends
rather
than
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new
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friends
.
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But
I believe that, making
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new
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friends
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add
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new
prospective and
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new
experience in to our life.

First
, to
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keep
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friendship
alive, it is
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very
necessary to
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keep
in touch. Nowadays, we can
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see
that lots of
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people
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moved
from one place to other place for variety of reasons.
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So
it
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becomes
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hard
to maintain long distance relationship between
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friends
. Although, advance in technology created social networking sits such as FACEBOOK AND TWITTER, which
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helps
to
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keep
in touch with our
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friends
and family,
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but
daily work and
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life
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makes
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person
that busy that he does not
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get
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time
to contact
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old
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friend
through social networking sites. In long run,
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old
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friends
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become
vanish from list.
However
,
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new
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friends
are one who give us
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company
in
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new
environment. It is not always true that
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new
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friends
harm us.
For example
, when I
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moved
to California from
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New
Jersey. I missed my
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old
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friends
and I
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used
to massage them daily
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but
as the
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time
passed, my
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old
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friends
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stopped
massaging me and I felt
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so
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bad
that they forget me.
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But
in few months I made one
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new
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friend
named
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&quot
;
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Pari&quot
;
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,
who is same as me, we both like to do adventure things, which made us not
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only
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good
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but
best
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friends
forever.
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So
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sometimes
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new
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friends
also
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become
part of our
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life
without any problem.

Secondly
, making a
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new
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friend
, would
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add
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new
experience in our
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life
. Although
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old
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friends
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know
about our
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good
and
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bad
things
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but
habits will
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change
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time
to
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time
,
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so
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old
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friends
are no longer familiar with our
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new
habits and nature.
Furthermore
,
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new
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friends
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know
everything about
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us and
they
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become
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so
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important
for us that we can not imagine
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life
without them.
Besides
,
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friendship
experience of
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new
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friends
are
totally
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different
, as we do not
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know
everything about each other as like an
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old
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friend
.
For instance
, when I was in college, one of my
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new
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friends
is from India. I
usually
heard her talking in her native language
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&quot
;
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Hindi&quot
; to her parents on phone. I was
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very
passionate about to learn
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new
language, and I
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learnt
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&quot
;
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Hindi&quot
; language from her.
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So
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old
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friends
are
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important
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but
making
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new
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friends
is always having a
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new
experience.

Finally
,
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old
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friends
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know
about our
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proc
and cons,
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so
they may be
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take
an advantage of us.
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While
we are not completely open book to
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new
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friends
.
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So
we do not
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have to
worry about
being cheated
or hurt. A
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little
talk with a
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new
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friends
also
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help
us
even though
we never
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seen
each other in
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person
, such as
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friends
from social networking sites.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
91Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Mistakes

IELTS essay It is easier to keep old friends than it is to make new friends. v. 808

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
509 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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