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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should receive money for doing household tasks such as cleaning. Use specific examples and details to support your opinion. v.75

Children should receive money for doing household tasks such as cleaning. Use specific examples and details to support your opinion. v. 75
Homework has become an essential part of school curriculum nowadays. Some individuals hold the perception that homework, which is assigned by their tutors should not be allowed because of its impact on physical and mental health of students, while others believe that to enhance the academic performance it should be provided. This essay will discuss both views, however, its own notions stands with the former view as it is an additional stress. To begin with, the first and the foremost, according to the supporters of former view providing extra work to do at home is nothing except than making them monotonous. Firstly, as educators, is taught five to six hours in educational Institution, at the time of school departure, they are given extra work to do which inhibits their playing hours and students used to live under pressure. Thus, it usually results in physical and mental tiredness. However, some believe that to ameliorate the study more, homework acts as a boon. In other words, students are elaborated the concepts in learning centres, doing the revision at home of same work assist them to understand the whole concept clearly. Students, for example, solve the mathematics questions in the class with the help of their mentors. But, if they do the same work at home with their own again. It can help them to pass with better grades. To conclude, as above mentioned both notions are explained in detail, yet this essay has faith in not to provide homework by keeping in mind the holistic growth of children as it is utmost necessary to be well-groomed. If we keep them under the stress of study for the full day, it will deteriorate their health obviously.
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Homework
has become an essential part of school curriculum nowadays.
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Some
individuals hold the perception that
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homework
, which
is assigned
by their tutors should not be
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allowed
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because
of its impact on physical and mental health of
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students
, while others believe that to enhance the academic performance it should
be provided
. This essay will discuss both views,
however
, its
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
notions stands with the former view as it is an additional
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
.

To
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begin
with, the
first
and the foremost, according to the supporters of former view providing extra
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work
to do at home is nothing except than making them monotonous.
Firstly
, as educators,
is taught
five to six hours in educational Institution, at the time of school departure, they are
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given
extra
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work
to do which inhibits their playing hours and
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students
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used
to
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live
under pressure.
Thus
, it
usually
results in physical and mental tiredness.

However
,
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some
believe that to ameliorate the study more,
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homework
acts as a boon.
In other words
,
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students
are elaborated
the concepts in learning
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centres
, doing the revision at home of same
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work
assist them to understand the whole concept
clearly
.
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Students
,
for example
, solve the mathematics questions in the
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class
with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of their mentors.
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But
, if they do the same
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work
at home with their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
again. It can
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help
them to pass with better grades.

To conclude
, as above mentioned both notions are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explained
in detail,
yet
this essay has faith in not to provide
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
homework
by keeping in mind the holistic growth of children as it is utmost necessary to be well-groomed. If we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
them under the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
of study for the full day, it will deteriorate their health
obviously
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay Children should receive money for doing household tasks such as cleaning. Use specific examples and details to support your opinion. v. 75

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
283 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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