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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Good teachers set challenging tasks for their students. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.694

Good teachers set challenging tasks for their students. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 694
Education is an important part of our lives. It broadens our opportunity to land a good job, and it determines our success in the future. Teachers are responsible to give us necessary information in the class and we will benefit from our teachers a lot since they build up our success and personality. Some times our teachers give us a lot of challenging tasks. Even though challenging tasks are difficutl to solve, personally, I agree that good teachers set challenging tasks for their students for two imperative reasons. To begin with, these tasks motivate students to study hard and to focus on their studying. In order to get essential information, teachers should introduce difficult assignments to insure that their student improve their education. Take my sister as an example, she is in high school and three weeks ago, she told me that her biology teacher is not giving them any assignment and he just explains the lecture and they are bored from this class. In fact, she said that she doesn' t like to study biology because of her teacher. According to my sister, most of student are not exciting to study biology and this affects their style of study since they are not motivating. Actually, she didn' t get a good score in Boilogy and this impacted her education negatively. As we can clearly see, teachers should set challenging tasks to inspire their students to study hard and to assure to get a lot of information that they need to make progress in their education. Second, challenging tasks will prepare students for future. Through working hard to solve these projects, students will have the chance to be more responsible to get the solutions and to search by themselves. For instance, when I was in middle school, our chemistry teacher was devoted and eager, and he gave us a lot of difficult project to work in. One day, he asked us to collect a lot of information about reaction between acid and base, and he mentioned that the report should include the causes of the reaction, the results, and the processing for it. At first, I was so confused because I didn' t know how I can collect this information and I went to my teacher and he explained to me that I have to be more confident and independent to search and to find a good piece of information. Eventually, I explored by myself and this helped a lot when I attneded pharmacy school since I knew to make a descion, and to be responsibble. This experience taught me that teachers should set challenging tasks for their students. By the way of conclusion, based on the argument explored above, I firmly concur that teachers should set challenging tasks for their students becuase students will benefit from it and it has a lot of advantages.
Education is an
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good
job, and it determines our success in the future.
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are responsible to give us necessary
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information
in the
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class and
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teachers
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since they build up our success and personality.
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times our
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teachers
give us a
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challenging
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tasks
.
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difficutl
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personally
, I
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that
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good
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teachers
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challenging
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tasks
for their
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students
for two imperative reasons.

To
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begin
with, these
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tasks
motivate
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students
to
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study
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hard
and to focus on their studying. In order to
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get
essential
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information
,
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teachers
should introduce difficult assignments to
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insure
that their
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student
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improve
their education. Take my sister as an example, she is in high school and three weeks ago, she
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told
me that her biology
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teacher
is not giving them any
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assignment and
he
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explains
the
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lecture and
they
are bored
from this
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class
. In fact, she said that she
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doesn&
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study
biology
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because
of her
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teacher
. According to my sister, most of
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student
are not exciting to
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study
biology and this affects their style of
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study
since they are not motivating. Actually, she
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didn&
#039; t
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get
a
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good
score in
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Boilogy
and this impacted her education
negatively
. As we can
clearly
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see
,
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teachers
should set
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challenging
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tasks
to inspire their
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students
to
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study
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hard
and to assure to
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get
a
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lot
of
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information
that they need to
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make
progress in their education.

Second,
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challenging
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tasks
will prepare
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students
for future. Through working
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hard
to solve these projects,
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students
will have the chance to be more responsible to
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get
the solutions and to search by themselves.
For instance
, when I was in middle school, our chemistry
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teacher
was devoted
and eager, and he gave us a
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lot
of difficult project to work in. One day, he asked us to collect a
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lot
of
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information
about reaction between acid and base, and he mentioned that the report should include the causes of the reaction, the results, and the processing for it. At
first
, I was
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so
confused
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because
I
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didn&
#039; t know how I can collect this
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information
and I went to my
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teacher and
he
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explained
to me that I
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have to
be more confident and independent to search and to find a
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good
piece of
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information
.
Eventually
, I explored by myself and this
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helped
a
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lot
when I
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attneded
pharmacy school since I knew to
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make
a
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descion
, and to be
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responsibble
. This experience taught me that
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teachers
should set
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challenging
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tasks
for their students.

By the way of conclusion, based on the argument explored above, I
firmly
concur that
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teachers
should set
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challenging
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tasks
for their
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students
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becuase
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students
will benefit from it and it has a
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lot
of advantages.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
58Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Mistakes

IELTS essay Good teachers set challenging tasks for their students. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 694

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
475 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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