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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.65

With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 65
People nowadays prefer to travel via train than by buses or private vehicles. I totally agree with the fact that the government should spend more on maintenance or improving the services of train facilities rather than constructing new roads. This essay will discuss the benefits of train services which include frequent connectivity, and they are more environmentally friendly. Trains are faster than buses or cars and it has stopped even in small villages. While travelling through trains we do not face traffic and it runs at higher maximum speed. Moreover, this will help passengers to reach their destination on time and with a short duration of travel compared to road journeys. For example, to travel from Ahmedabad to Mumbai in a bus it takes 14 hours while in the train it takes only 8 hours. This will not only give them good grades, but also helps them to improve their writing skills which is very much required in today's world. Also, train journeys are quite environment-friendly. A train can accommodate more number of travellers when compared to buses or cars. So less emission of carbon dioxide because of fewer cars. However, it will help in fighting climate change which is a global issue. For instance, Delhi's government has increased the metro frequency and has made free of charge for women passengers. They will have hands-on on different technologies before stepping out in the corporate world. In conclusion, trains will help not only to save time, but also will help us to save our environment to a global extent. They will have hands-on on different technologies before stepping out in the corporate world.
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nowadays prefer to travel via
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train
than by buses or private vehicles. I
totally
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agree with the fact that
the
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government
should spend more on maintenance or improving the services of
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train
facilities
rather
than constructing new roads. This essay will discuss the benefits of
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train
services which include frequent connectivity, and they are more
environmentally
friendly.

Trains are faster than buses or cars and it has
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stopped
even in
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small
villages. While travelling through
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trains
we do not face traffic and it runs at higher maximum speed.
Moreover
, this will
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help
passengers to reach their destination on time and with a short duration of travel compared to road journeys.
For example
, to travel from Ahmedabad to Mumbai in a bus it takes 14 hours while in the
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train
it takes
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only
8 hours. This will not
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only
give them
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good
grades,
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but
also
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helps
them to
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improve
their writing
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skills
which is
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very
much required in
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today
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,
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journeys are quite environment-friendly. A
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can accommodate more number of
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travellers
when compared to buses or cars.
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less emission of carbon dioxide
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because
of fewer cars.
However
, it will
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help
in fighting climate
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change
which is a global issue.
For instance
, Delhi's
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government
has increased the metro frequency and has made free of charge for women passengers. They will have hands-on on
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different
technologies
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before
stepping out in the corporate world.

In conclusion
,
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trains
will
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help
not
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only
to save time,
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but
also
will
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help
us to save our environment to a global extent. They will have hands-on on
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different
technologies
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before
stepping out in the corporate world.
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IELTS essay With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 65

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
272 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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