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do you agree or disagree with the following statement? professors are found in the university classrooms and libraries for doing research, not for appearing on TV. v.642

professors are found in the university classrooms and libraries for doing research, not for appearing on TV. v. 642
Nobody can deny the fact and the truth that TV plays a vitally important role in every person' s life, and it is considered quite critical and crucial. Moreover, it is a worldwide known reality that TV is a key factor that formulates a lifespan of all human beings. Based on all conducted statistics, studies, and research, one may state that professors are found in classrooms and libraries doing research. Heading out of all my own experience and observations, I am totally convinced that the professor should appear as guests on TV news programs for so many varied and different reasons. First, it is more valuable because appearing on TV is a great benefit to the professors themselves by doing acquire a reputation. A small example can give light to this. For example, if the professor publishes views in an academic journal, only other scholars will learn about those views. On the other hand, when a professor appears on TV, thousands of people become aware of the professor' s idea. Therefore, the professor' s importance as scholars is enhanced. Secondly, it is more useful because appearing on TV has numerous benefits mot only for the general public by learning from experts but also for the universities by receiving positive publicity. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Last year, when I saw a knowledgeable faculty member of the ECU on TV, I think more highly of that university. Hence, that improved reputation led me to make a donation for this university. Heading out of all the previously mentioned discussions, I can sum up and conclude that the professor' s appearing on TV takes priority over founding in university classrooms all the time due to the fact that it benefits the professor and because it benefits the university as well as for the public.
Nobody can deny the fact and the truth that TV plays a
vitally
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important
role in every
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person&
#039; s life, and it
is considered
quite critical and crucial.
Moreover
, it is a
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worldwide known
reality that TV is a key factor that formulates a lifespan of all human beings. Based on all conducted statistics, studies, and research, one may state that
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professors
are found
in classrooms and libraries doing research. Heading out of all my
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own
experience and observations, I am
totally
convinced that the
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professor
should appear as guests on TV news programs for
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so
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many
varied and
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different
reasons.

First
, it is more valuable
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because
appearing on TV is a great
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benefit
to the
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professors
themselves by doing acquire a reputation. A
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small
example can give light to this.
For example
, if the
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professor
publishes views in an academic journal,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
other scholars will learn about those views.
On the other hand
, when a
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professor
appears on TV, thousands of
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people
become aware of the
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professor&
#039; s
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idea
.
Therefore
, the
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professor&
#039; s importance as scholars
is enhanced
.

Secondly
, it is more useful
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because
appearing on TV has numerous
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benefits
mot
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only
for the
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general public
by learning from experts
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but
also
for the
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universities
by receiving
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positive
publicity. My
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
experience is a compelling example of this. Last year, when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
a knowledgeable faculty member of the ECU on TV, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
more
highly
of that
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university
.
Hence
, that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
reputation led me to
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make
a donation for this university.

Heading out of all the previously mentioned discussions, I can sum up and conclude that the
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professor&
#039; s appearing on TV takes priority over founding in
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university
classrooms all the time due to the fact that it
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benefits
the
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professor
and
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because
it
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benefits
the
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university
as well
as for the public.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS essay professors are found in the university classrooms and libraries for doing research, not for appearing on TV. v. 642

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
305 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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