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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teaching students is more important for professors than doing research. v.149

Teaching students is more important for professors than doing research. v. 149
In this present-day of developed civilisation, science and technology have improved by leaps and bounds, which has led to increased annual consumption of various commodities, and their consequential disposal. However, simply discarding some of these wastes is harmful, and often hazardous to the very environment we live in, which calls for strict provisions for proper recycling of these scraps. In my opinion, many people fail to understand the environmental impact and the need of reusing our used commodities to avoid the disaster that their improper dumping can ensue, which I believe makes it a necessity for there to be stringent laws set by the governments to allow for optimum recycling of wastes by citizens of this country. Let us consider a scenario in which the mass discards their goods, which are not supposed to be dumped because of their environmental hazard, out in the nature, some very nasty outcome can be set into motion that can lead to banishing out the life from the entire planet surface. For instance, the chemical industries dump their heavy chemical substances into water bodies which has led to severe water pollution and there have been cases wherein, an entire school of fish was discovered to have poisonous chemicals in their system. Therefore, some rules implemented by the authorities that regulate safer reuse of these toxic materials can prove to be helpful for the ecosystem, and the organisms living in it. In another scenario, people living in cities and towns for example, very conveniently take care of their used as well as unused plastics and glasswares by throwing them away. These items are non-degradable and remain in the soil for an infinite duration of time leading to soil pollution, which in turn, results in loss of the forest cover and ultimately soil erosion. Thus, a set of laws incorporated by the higher-ups can penalize people who irresponsibly dump their commodities instead of properly recycling them, as stated by the law, in order to sustain the planet and its environment. In a nutshell, I believe that a series of robust as well as proficient waste management and recycling laws for either industrial or domestic based scraps can come in handy when it comes to preserving our ecosystem and the precious lives of various animals, including us, who inhabit it, as correctly stated by some people.
In this present-day of developed
civilisation
, science and technology have
improved
by leaps and bounds, which has led to increased annual consumption of various commodities, and their consequential disposal.
However
,
simply
discarding
some
of these wastes is harmful, and
often
hazardous to the
very
environment we
live
in, which calls for strict provisions for proper
recycling
of these scraps. In my opinion,
many
people
fail to understand the environmental impact and the need of reusing our
used
commodities to avoid the disaster that their improper dumping can ensue, which I believe
makes
it a necessity for there to be stringent
laws
set by the
governments
to
allow
for optimum
recycling
of wastes by citizens of this country.

Let
us consider a scenario in which the mass discards their
goods
, which are not supposed to
be dumped
because
of their environmental hazard, out in the nature,
some
very
nasty outcome can
be set
into motion that can lead to banishing out the life from the entire planet surface.
For instance
, the chemical industries dump their heavy chemical substances into water bodies which has led to severe water pollution and there have been cases wherein, an entire school of fish
was discovered
to have poisonous chemicals in their system.
Therefore
,
some
rules
implemented by the authorities that regulate safer reuse of these toxic materials can prove to be helpful for the ecosystem, and the organisms living in it.

In another scenario,
people
living in cities and towns
for example
,
very
conveniently
take care of their
used
as well
as unused plastics and
glasswares
by throwing them away. These items are non-degradable and remain in the soil for an infinite duration of time leading to soil pollution, which in turn, results in loss of the forest cover and
ultimately
soil erosion.
Thus
, a set of
laws
incorporated by the higher-ups can penalize
people
who
irresponsibly
dump their commodities
instead
of
properly
recycling
them, as stated by the
law
, in order to sustain the planet and its environment.

In a nutshell, I believe that a series of robust
as well
as proficient waste management and
recycling
laws
for either industrial or domestic based scraps can
come
in handy when it
comes
to preserving our ecosystem and the precious
lives
of various animals, including us, who inhabit it, as
correctly
stated by
some
people
.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Teaching students is more important for professors than doing research. v. 149

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
389 words
7
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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