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Do you agree or disagree with following statement Some people think university professors should spend more time doing research while others think they should spend more time educating students. v.2

Some people think university professors should spend more time doing research while others think they should spend more time educating students. v. 2
Even though educating students is an original purpose of our universities, doing research should never be forgotten. University professors have to manage their time in order to teach and do research. Widespread of people hold the concept those professors should spend most of their time for doing projects and encourage their students to cooperate with them; others however have a negative attitude toward it. Accordingly, a controversial question which is often raised regarding this idea is whether research projects are more valuable and significant than teaching for our universities. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly agreed with first group people' s idea and I would explicate my chief reasons through the following paragraphs. To commence, the first subtle point which requires to be mentioned is the majority of our researches and scientists have been employed at universities. In addition, government assigns a specific budget for either completing research projects or starting new ones. For instance, most of time I heard at news that a new discovery or an innovative notion has been found by a research team from one of the American Universities. As everybody know, United State is known as a prominent development country because of its progresses in the various sciences and fields such as medical, human, biology, art, and etc. These advances have been caused by professor' s research projects which they have been doing at universities. Since the growth of countries relies on the number of researches at universities, professors have to allocate most of their time for carrying out research. Another compelling reason which comes into consideration is professors need to update their knowledge on purpose to teach well and answer students' question correctly. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistics, revealed by a recently conducted social research, declares more than 80 percent of knowledgeable and skillful graduated university students had studied at universities with research tendency among their professors. When professors have adequate and recent knowledge, they could educate more capable and practical students for our society. Professors can fortify their knowledge by searching new ideas and fields, so they must have a certain time for doing research. To wrap it up, all aforementioned arguments lead us to the fact that research must be considered as the first priority by professors due to improvement of our country and upgrading their learning and wisdoms. I firmly recommend universities organize plans for promoting the research projects among professors. If professors do more research, we would have more advanced countries.
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educating
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students
is an original purpose of our
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universities
,
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doing
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research
should never
be forgotten
.
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University
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professors
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have to
manage their
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time
in order to teach and do
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research
. Widespread of
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people
hold the concept those
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professors
should spend most of their
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time
for
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doing
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projects
and encourage their
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students
to cooperate with them; others
however
have a
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negative
attitude toward it.
Accordingly
, a controversial question which is
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often
raised regarding this
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idea
is whether
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research
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projects
are more valuable and significant than teaching for our
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universities
. As far as I
am concerned
, I am
strongly
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agreed
with
first
group
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idea
and I would explicate my chief reasons through the following paragraphs.

To commence, the
first
subtle point which requires to
be mentioned
is the majority of our
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researches
and scientists have
been employed
at
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universities
.
In addition
,
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government
assigns a specific budget for either completing
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research
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projects
or starting
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new
ones.
For instance
, most of
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time
I heard at
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news
that a
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new
discovery or an innovative notion has
been found
by a
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research
team from one of the American
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Universities
. As everybody
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know
, United State
is known
as a prominent development
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country
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because
of its progresses in the various sciences and fields such as medical, human, biology, art,
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and etc
. These advances have
been caused
by
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professor&
#039; s
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research
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projects
which they have been
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doing
at
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universities
. Since the growth of
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countries
relies on the number of
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researches
at
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universities
,
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professors
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have to
allocate most of their
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time
for carrying out research.

Another compelling reason which
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comes
into consideration is
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professors
need to update their knowledge on purpose to teach well and answer
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students&
#039; question
correctly
. A noteworthy
refreshingly
intelligible statistics, revealed by a recently conducted social
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research
, declares more than 80 percent of knowledgeable and skillful
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graduated
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university
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students
had studied at
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universities
with
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research
tendency among their
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professors
. When
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professors
have adequate and recent knowledge, they could educate more capable and practical
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students
for our society.
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Professors
can fortify their knowledge by searching
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new
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ideas
and fields,
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so
they
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must
have a certain
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time
for
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doing
research.

To wrap it up, all aforementioned arguments lead us to the fact that
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research
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be considered
as the
first
priority by
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professors
due to improvement of our
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country
and upgrading their learning and
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wisdoms
. I
firmly
recommend
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universities
organize plans for promoting the
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research
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projects
among
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professors
. If
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professors
do more
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research
, we would have more advanced
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countries
.
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61Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think university professors should spend more time doing research while others think they should spend more time educating students. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
414 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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