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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the future, a majority of people will work from home. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.638

In the future, a majority of people will work from home. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 638
The advent of internet has provided the option to work remotely without being present physically. therefore, the question of how the employees will work in the future has become imperative. personally, I believe more number of employees would be working from home. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay. To begin with, work from home is really comfortable, which increases the productivity of the employee. At home, a person gets liberty to do work from anywhere he wants to, like it is cold outside so the person can work by sitting in the warmth of his bed. For example, as I am employed in computer science field, most of the times I skip going to office so that I can get the liberty. Moreover, by not going to office I am saving the travelling money and also my time which has been consumed while commuting. Instead, I can use that time to complete my office work and get some more free time to enjoy with my family. therefore, whenever I choose to do my job by sitting at home, I have plenty of time to do some other household work and have sufficient time to spend with my family, which also improves my productivity. if I do not choose to work from home, I would not get the ample time to spend with my family and I might be not happy in doing my work. Secondly, companies also prefer the working remotely trend, which saves an appreciable amount of money for the company. By making the employees to work from home, organization are freed from the responsibility of building a office space for the person, giving medical insurance and also other benefits that an employee should have but now the industries don' t have to make such allocations, thus saving a lot of funds. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. my father runs a construction company, where there is no department for the architectures. Actually, in order to increase the profits my father have made the architect to work remotely, which is saving space in the company to do some other work and also my father don' t have to provide additional benefits to the employees. he just needs to pay them when they complete their given work. therefore, if this trend continues more number of employees would have to submit their work remotely as the industries would make heavy profits by not having the burden of providing facilities to the working class. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that in future work from home will be a commonplace. this is because it gives some leisure time to person to spend time with family and because organizations have the oppourtunity to save plenty of money.
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work
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remotely
without being present
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.
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therefore
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employees
will
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work
in the future has become imperative.
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personally
, I believe more number of
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employees
would be working from home. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

To
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begin
with,
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work
from home is
really
comfortable, which increases the productivity of the
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employee
. At home, a
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person
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gets
liberty to do
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work
from anywhere he wants to, like it is
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cold
outside
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so
the
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person
can
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work
by sitting in the warmth of his bed.
For example
, as I
am employed
in computer science field, most of the
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times
I skip going to
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office
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so
that I can
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get
the liberty.
Moreover
, by not going to
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office
I am saving the travelling money and
also
my
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time
which has
been consumed
while commuting.
Instead
, I can
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that
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time
to complete my
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office
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work
and
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get
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some
more free
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time
to enjoy with my
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family
.
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therefore
, whenever I choose to do my job by sitting at home, I have
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plenty
of
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time
to do
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some
other household
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work
and have sufficient
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time
to spend with my
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family
, which
also
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improves
my productivity.
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if
I do not choose to
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work
from home, I would not
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get
the ample
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time
to spend with my
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family
and I might be not happy in doing my work.

Secondly
,
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companies
also
prefer the working
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remotely
trend, which saves an appreciable amount of money for the
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company
. By making the
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employees
to
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work
from home, organization
are freed
from the responsibility of building
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a
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office
space for the
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person
, giving medical insurance and
also
other benefits that an
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employee
should have
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but
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now
the industries
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make
such allocations,
thus
saving
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a lot of
funds.
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my
personal experience is a compelling example of this.
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my
father runs a construction
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company
, where there is no department for the architectures. Actually, in order to increase the profits my father have made the architect to
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work
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remotely
, which is saving space in the
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company
to do
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some
other
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work
and
also
my father
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have to
provide additional benefits to the
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employees
.
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he
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just
needs to pay them when they complete their
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given
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work
.
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therefore
, if this trend continues more number of
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employees
would
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have to
submit their
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work
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remotely
as the industries would
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make
heavy profits by not having the burden of providing facilities to the working
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class
.

In conclusion
, I am of the opinion that in future
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work
from home will be a commonplace.
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this
is
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because
it gives
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some
leisure
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time
to
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person
to spend
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time
with
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family
and
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because
organizations have the
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oppourtunity
to save
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19Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
50Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Mistakes

IELTS essay In the future, a majority of people will work from home. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 638

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
467 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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