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Being able to speak well is better than being able to write well v. 555
In contemporary society, it’s undeniable that speaking and writing are the basic of modern linguistics. However, these days, some people argue that good in speaking is considerable than good in writing. Although it seems reasonable, I strongly disagree with such notion, and I believe that splendid writing is more useful. This essay will provide further aspects and examples to support this idea. First and foremost, texts can be effectively spread information wider than speech. Either passage or word is quickly passed its meaning to people. This is because people can readily perceive information from their seeing than listening. I can attest this from my own experience when I traveled to Chiang Mai, the famous city in the north of Thailand, I got lost in the city because I was unfamiliar with this place. Additionally, I needed more information about the location to find my selected restaurant. Fortunately, there were many signages on the street, so I commuted to the restaurant by following the information words on the billboards. In this case, words on the signages effectively provide concise information. It is not only understandable for me or other people but people also can travel directly to the destination without losing anymore. Secondly, people who are excellent in writing tend to be an elaborate person than those who are speaking well. This is because writing has a more complicated structure than speech. Speaking is immediate action from human’s thought, while writing has many processes to concern such as grammar, spelling and sentence structure. To illustrate this, when I studied at Chulalongkorn University, I must write a thesis book for ending my project. The thesis book required quality of writing because all of the information should be intelligible. It needed to be summarized, then be transferred to surgical written form. Therefore, writing thesis book challenged me to be more elaborate. In conclusion, I obviously agree that professional in writing is better. This is due to the fact that people who are capable to write splendidly will be elaborate, and writing is capable to be effective information that spread wider than speaking.
In contemporary society, it’s undeniable that speaking and
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writing
are the basic of modern linguistics.
However
, these days,
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some
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people
argue that
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good in speaking
is
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considerable
than
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good
in
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writing
. Although it seems reasonable, I
strongly
disagree with such notion, and I believe that splendid
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writing
is more useful. This essay will provide
further
aspects and examples to support this
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idea
.

First
and foremost, texts can be
effectively
spread
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information
wider than speech. Either passage or word is
quickly
passed its meaning to
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people
. This is
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because
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people
can
readily
perceive
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information
from their seeing than listening. I can attest this from my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
experience when I traveled to Chiang Mai, the
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famous
city in the north of Thailand, I
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got
lost in the city
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because
I was unfamiliar with this place.
Additionally
, I needed more
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information
about the location to find my selected restaurant.
Fortunately
, there were
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many
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signages on
the street,
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so
I commuted to the restaurant by following the
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information
words on the billboards.
In this case
, words on the
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signages
effectively
provide concise
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information
. It is not
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only
understandable for me or other
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people
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but
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people
also
can travel
directly
to the destination without losing anymore.

Secondly
,
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people
who are excellent in
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writing
tend to be an elaborate person than those who are speaking well. This is
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because
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writing
has a more complicated structure than speech. Speaking is immediate action from human’s
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thought
, while
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writing
has
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many
processes to concern such as grammar, spelling and sentence structure. To illustrate this, when I studied at
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Chulalongkorn
University, I
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must
write a thesis book for ending my project. The thesis book required quality of
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writing
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because
Consider using "all the".
all of the
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information
should be intelligible. It needed to
be summarized
, then
be transferred
to surgical written form.
Therefore
,
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writing
thesis book challenged me to be more elaborate.

In conclusion
, I
obviously
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agree
that professional in
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writing
is better.
This is due to the fact that
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people
who are capable to write
splendidly
will be elaborate, and
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writing
is capable to be effective
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information
that spread wider than speaking.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Being able to speak well is better than being able to write well v. 555

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
349 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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