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Being able to speak well is more important than being able to write well. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer. v.1

Being able to speak well is more important than being able to write well. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer. v. 1
In the world of artificial intelligence, technology has taken over many things. One of the latest invention is Electronic books or E-books, which becomes quite famous as soon as they came into existence. We are able to read lots of books on our smartphones, tablets through e-books and despite the benefits some people believe it brings no good to mankind. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of e-books. Electronic books can be read anywhere, anytime and we won't need to carry heavy books with us. E-books are good for the environment too, as lots of paper is required to print a book and paper is extracted from the trees. With the use of e-books the demand of paper is decreased and as a result of which, the rate of deforestation decreased. Moreover, it is convenient to use e-books as we have a variety of books to read at the same time, without the need of carrying them. On the other hand, many people see this invention as a waste of time and money. They believe the native way of reading that is read from the physical books is still the best way to enjoy it. E-books can damage our eyes because of the radiation coming from the screen. We work on our laptops, for more than 8 hours a day and after that reading through an e-book effect eyes badly. In conclusion, there are many advantages and disadvantages of e-books. They could cause irritation in the eyes if used for a longer period of time without a break. However, it is good for the environment, as it saves lots of paper which clearly states that advantages of e-books prevails over its disadvantages.
In the world of artificial intelligence, technology has taken over
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many
things. One of the latest
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invention
is Electronic
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books
or E-books, which becomes quite
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famous
as
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soon
as they came into existence. We are able to
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read
lots of
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books
on our smartphones, tablets through e-books and despite the benefits
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some
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people
believe it brings no
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
to mankind. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of e-books.

Electronic
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books
can be
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read
anywhere,
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anytime and
we won't need to carry heavy
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books
with us. E-books are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
for the environment too, as lots of paper
is required
to print a
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book
and paper
is extracted
from the trees. With the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of e-books the demand of paper
is decreased
and
as a result
of which, the rate of deforestation decreased.
Moreover
, it is convenient to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
e-books as we have a variety of
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books
to
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read
at the same time, without the need of carrying them.

On the other hand
,
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many
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people
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see
this invention as a waste of time and money. They believe the native way of reading
that is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
read
from the physical
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books
is
still
the best way to enjoy it. E-books can damage our eyes
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because
of the radiation coming from the screen. We work on our laptops, for more than 8 hours a day and after that reading through an e-book effect eyes
badly
.

In conclusion
, there are
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many
advantages and disadvantages of e-books. They could cause irritation in the eyes if
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for a longer period of time without a break.
However
, it is
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good
for the environment, as it saves lots of paper which
clearly
states that advantages of e-books prevails over its disadvantages.
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IELTS essay Being able to speak well is more important than being able to write well. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
284 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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