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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Patience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later. v.535

Patience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later. v. 535
Patience is always considered as a good metrit, especially when we are endeavoring on the way to success or facing failure for seveeral times. However, when it comes to decision making, we need to take action right now rather than wondering or waiting the chance to come to us. I would like to explore my viewpoint with the following two primary reasons. For one thing, passion is one of the components which support us to fulfill our goals. Withour passion, hardly can we achieve our aim since we loose the inner power. At the time of making the decision, our passion reach the highest point. It' s definitely the right time for us to take actions immediately. On the contrary, if we treat the decision with patience, there' s no doubt that we will miss the probable time and will never gain the passion again. There' s a case in point from my own experience, 2 years ago, I was so fancy in violin after taking part in a well-known concert, I have planned to learn it one year later. Ironically, I was so busy and had no intention of learning one year passed. As the consequence, I' ve never learned how to play violin until now. My precious experience also taught me that it' s significant for us to take measures immeadiately no matter when the idea hit our minds. For another, even though double consideration can give us more chance of finding a more suitable method, we would easily fear of the consequance after double consideration. After the new idea has inspired us, it' s common to weigh the advantages and disadcantages. In another words, what can we gain and what will we loose after the effort. Unfortunately, as a normal mankind, we would easily be scared by the possible consequence. For example, One of my friends, Marry, decided to study abroad, never had she start to prepare for the materia she need to provide, she just considered about how difficult it is to pass those tests and what if he failed in those tests or didn' t get any offer. Rather, we learn from doing, it' s better to take action immediately rather than considering the possible consequence. Double consideration usually leads to miss the idea. In short, if we treat the inspiring thought with the patience and second confirmation, we would take the risk of loosing the passion and retreat for fearing of possible consequence. It' s wise to take action from now on, I bet we would learn tremendous knowledge from practicing. Keep in mind, Just do it!
Patience is always considered as a
good
metrit
,
especially
when we are endeavoring on the way to success or facing failure for
seveeral
times
.
However
, when it
comes
to
decision making
, we need to take
action
right
now
rather
than wondering or waiting the chance to
come
to us. I would like to explore my viewpoint with the following two primary reasons.

For one thing,
passion
is one of the components which support us to fulfill our goals.
Withour
passion
, hardly can we achieve our aim since we loose the inner power. At the
time
of making the decision, our
passion
reach the highest point.
It&
#039; s definitely the right
time
for us to take actions immediately.
On the contrary
, if we treat the decision with patience,
there&
#039; s no doubt that we will miss the probable
time
and will never gain the
passion
again.
There&
#039; s a case in point from my
own
experience, 2 years ago, I was
so
fancy in violin after taking part in a well-known concert, I have planned to learn it one year later.
Ironically
, I was
so
busy and had no intention of learning one year passed. As the
consequence
,
I&
#039; ve never learned how to play violin until
now
. My precious experience
also
taught me that
it&
#039; s significant for us to take measures
immeadiately
no matter when the
idea
hit our minds.

For another,
even though
double consideration can give us more chance of finding a more suitable method, we would
easily
fear of the
consequance
after double consideration. After the new
idea
has inspired us,
it&
#039; s common to weigh the advantages and
disadcantages
. In
another words
, what can we gain and what will we loose after the effort. Unfortunately, as a normal mankind, we would
easily
be scared
by the possible
consequence
.
For example
, One of my friends, Marry, decided to study abroad, never had she
start
to prepare for the
materia
she need to provide, she
just
considered about how
difficult it is to pass those
tests
and what if he failed in those
tests
or
didn&
#039; t
get
any offer.
Rather
, we learn from doing,
it&
#039; s better to take
action
immediately
rather
than considering the possible
consequence
. Double consideration
usually
leads to miss the
idea
.

In short, if we treat the inspiring
thought
with the patience and second confirmation, we would take the
risk
of
loosing the
passion
and retreat for fearing of possible
consequence
.
It&
#039; s wise to take
action
from
now
on, I bet we would learn tremendous knowledge from practicing.
Keep
in mind,
Just
do it!
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20Mistakes

IELTS essay Patience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later. v. 535

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
433 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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