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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 'It is impossible to be completely honest with friends. v.521

'It is impossible to be completely honest with friends. v. 521
The question is whether It is impossible to be completely honest with friends or not. This question requires a deep understand from relationship what we seek and want in an association, so with this in mind everyone can maintain a specific direction toward this statement; however I am inclined to express that there is not any impossible thing in the world and in my view, one of the most noticeable factor in each tie is honesty. I feel this way for some reasons, which I will explore them in following essay for empowering my argument: To begin with, it goes without saying that nowadays people live in the world that the trust has been lost its state; therefore people have become skeptical in compared with the past. Being introvert has caused human begins to relay on each other barely, even more this circumstance has affected on their communications. It is often said by psychologists that todays' strict rules play a crucial role in choosing friends; hence, a small lie in a relationship which has been built based on moral values can create destructive consequence. To elucidate, take my own experience. After experiencing some failed friendships, finally I could make an appropriate friend for myself. All things were awesome until my ex-boyfriend called me and asked me to visit him for receiving my old stuffs. I thought that it was not necessary to notice to my new friend and then I went to that appointment. Coincidentally my new- friend came to drink a coffee with his boss. Needless to say the rest of story but in short my new friendship ruined and that former trust never returned while I felt it could be a mundane issue lack of worth for saying. The second reason for my vantage point lies the fact that if someone lies for one time, he will be used to doing this. There is a proverb in my culture that if a person steals an egg in childhood, he will rob the ostrich in the future because soul of humanistic requires it. Lie can influence on creating other negative features. If a man cannot say the reality simply, he will foster disloyalty, betrayal and so on in himself. In addition, some people believe that there is a type of lie which is called white lie. This type of lie is not capable to harm on others; however, one should not forget that the white lie term has been created by people who want to justify their wrong behavior. No matter how safe it is, it is able to sear reliance roots. As I have illustrated, I strongly disagree with lack of honest in any relationship. If we accept to commence a friendship, so we have to be engaged to its rules otherwise about horrible consequence, we will be responsible.
The question is whether It is impossible to be completely honest with
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friends
or not. This question requires a deep understand from relationship what we seek and want in an association,
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so
with this in mind everyone can maintain a specific direction toward this statement;
however
I
am inclined
to express that there is not any impossible thing in the world and in my view, one of the most noticeable factor in each tie is honesty. I feel this way for
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some
reasons, which I will explore them in following essay for empowering my argument:

To
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begin
with, it goes without saying that nowadays
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people
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live
in the world that the trust has
been lost
its state;
therefore
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people
have become skeptical in compared with the past. Being introvert has caused human
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begins
to relay on each other
barely
, even more this circumstance has
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affected
on their communications. It is
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often
said by psychologists that
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todays&
#039; strict
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rules
play a crucial role in choosing
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friends
;
hence
, a
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small
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lie
in a relationship which has
been built
based
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moral
values can create destructive consequence. To elucidate, take my
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own
experience. After experiencing
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some
failed friendships,
finally
I could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
an appropriate
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friend
for myself. All things were awesome until my ex-boyfriend called me and asked me to visit him for receiving my
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
stuffs. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
that it was not necessary to notice to my new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friend
and then I went to that appointment.
Coincidentally
my new-
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friend
came to drink a coffee with his boss. Needless to say the rest of story
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
in short my new friendship ruined and that former trust never returned while I felt it could be a mundane issue lack of worth for saying.

The second reason for my vantage point lies the fact that if someone lies for one time, he will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to doing this. There is a proverb in my culture that if a person steals an egg in childhood, he will rob the ostrich in the future
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
soul of humanistic requires it.
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Lie
can influence on creating other
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
features. If a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
cannot say the reality
simply
, he will foster disloyalty, betrayal and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
on in himself.
In addition
,
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some
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people
believe that there is a type of
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lie
which
is called
white
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lie
. This type of
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lie
is not capable to harm on others;
however
, one should not forget that the white
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lie
term has
been created
by
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people
who want to justify their
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
wrong
behavior. No matter how safe it is, it is able to sear reliance roots.

As I have illustrated, I
strongly
disagree with lack of honest in any relationship. If we accept to commence a friendship,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
we
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have to
be engaged
to its
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rules
otherwise
about horrible consequence, we will be responsible.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay 'It is impossible to be completely honest with friends. v. 521

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
471 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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