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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is impossible to always be honest with your friends. v.599

It is impossible to always be honest with your friends. v. 599
From a general perspective, friendship is the most important among all individuals' relationships, so accordingly they have to have dos and don' ts list in their communication for the sake of keeping a good relationship. One of the biggest controversies related to friendship is that whether or not friends must be completely honest, or in more detail, they can always be fully honest or not? As far as I am concerned, being unconditionally honest is an unreasonable behavior among friends. The reasons make me think so are as follows. In first place, it is true that honesty is one of the precious properties of a good friend, but sometimes there is another consideration which outweighs it like emotional feeling of our friends. Take my experience with my best friend as an example - She is extremely excited and emotional person who is really relied on me as a friend. She is a runner that always take apart in our university' s running competitions. I remember the day when she had won all of her competitors in group level, and wanted to pass final race with her rival who was definitely better than her. She was very optimistic about her final game and asked me to express my opinion about her ability. If I told her my real point of view not only she would become disappointed by me, but also her efficiency would be decreased. Hence, I preferred to tell a white lie to her which was the only reasonable choice. Secondly, generally speaking, honesty don’t always bring friends benefits. I think in some circumstances saying the truth is even immoral. Sometimes if we want, to be honest, we need to refer to others' talk which will be unethical because they have trust us that we will keep their secrets. For instance, roughly 2 years ago when I was a bachelor student, I had a classmate; his name was David, who lived in our dormitory too. Once day he came to our room and talked about one of my friends, Swan. He was very angry and said that how Swan is selfish and impolite. Surprisingly, yesterday I realized that now he is swan' s boyfriend. I saw swan yesterday in a bus where she said to me about their relationship. Swan said that David has been in love with her since the first year of our bachelor, he himself had said to her. Even though I knew that it was not true, I preferred to be silent at that moment and don’t tell the truth. In summary, by taken this into account, in my opinion friends cannot always tell the truth because of some more important considerations in friendship and also its contradiction with moral behavior toward others. Who can in their right mind say that honesty always is the best choice?
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individuals&
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so
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they
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have to
have dos and
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don&
#039; ts list in their communication for the sake of keeping a
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good
relationship. One of the biggest controversies related to friendship is that
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whether or not
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friends
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must
be completely
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honest
, or in more detail, they can always be
fully
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honest
or not?

As far as I
am concerned
, being
unconditionally
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honest
is an unreasonable behavior among
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friends
. The reasons
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make
me
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think
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so
are as follows. In
first
place, it is true that honesty is one of the precious properties of a
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good
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friend
,
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but
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sometimes
there is another consideration which outweighs it like emotional feeling of our
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friends
. Take my experience with my best
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friend
as an example
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-
She is
extremely
excited and emotional person
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who
is
really
relied on me as a
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friend
. She is a runner that always take apart in our
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university&
#039; s running competitions. I remember the day when she had won all of her competitors in group level, and wanted to pass final race with her rival
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who
was definitely better than her. She was
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very
optimistic about her final game and asked me to express my opinion about her ability. If I
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told
her my real point of view not
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only
she would become disappointed by me,
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but
also
her efficiency would
be decreased
.
Hence
, I preferred to
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tell
a white lie to her which was the
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only
reasonable choice.

Secondly
,
generally
speaking, honesty don’t always bring
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friends
benefits. I
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think
in
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some
circumstances saying the truth is even immoral.
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Sometimes
if we want, to be
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honest
, we need to refer to
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others&
#039; talk which will be unethical
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because
they have
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trust
us that we will
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keep
their secrets.
For instance
, roughly 2 years ago when I was a bachelor student, I had a classmate; his name was David,
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who
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lived
in our dormitory too. Once day he came to our room and talked about one of my
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friends
, Swan. He was
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very
angry and said that how Swan is selfish and impolite.
Surprisingly
, yesterday I realized that
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now
he is
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swan&
#039; s boyfriend. I
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saw
swan yesterday in a bus where she said to me about their relationship. Swan said that David has been in
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love
with her since the
first
year of our bachelor, he himself had said to her.
Even though
I knew that it was not true, I preferred to be silent at that moment and don’t
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tell
the truth. In summary, by taken this into account, in my opinion
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friends
cannot always
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tell
the truth
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because
of
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some
more
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important
considerations in friendship and
also
its contradiction with moral behavior toward others.
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Who
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can
in their right mind say that honesty always is the best choice?
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS essay It is impossible to always be honest with your friends. v. 599

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
472 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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