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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To solve the problems of the present and the future, people should review the past. v.518

To solve the problems of the present and the future, people should review the past. v. 518
As the living tempo quickens, there are a lot problems coming along with the development and amelioration of people' s living standard. Considering this situation, there is a controversial statement that, in order to fix the problems in the present and the coming future, people need to review and learn from the past we did. On the one hand people agree with this statement since they think the past when we made mistakes is our teachers. However, there is a considerable number of people are in the opposite. In my opinion, I do agree with this statement. Herbert. A. Simon said, the life without review and reflection is not worth to live. So reviewing the past could be great to help us fix problems. First, the experience accumulated from the past would help us be more momentous and efficient to fix the difficulies of the present and the future. Some problems we would meet in the present or in the future are constructural similar, which means that we could use the wisdom and the experience from the past to figure out them. If we do not review, we could never remember the experience which might be useful and save time to fix problems. For example, when I was in my undergraduate study, I choose math as my major at first. However, I gradually found it is painful to learn math. And then I begin to review the past to figure out why I felt like that. Luckily I found the problem is my study habits were not good, which were similar to the past problems in my high school study. With the help of the experience that I obtained in my high school, I fixed the problem. Therefore, review the past could be really efficient to deal with the problems. In addtion, the mistakes we had made in the past could ensure us to be more confident in the similar stituation. If we ignore the mistakes in the past and do not review them, it will be the same that we ingored the price we had paid, which could allow us to have next sad similar adveristy. For instance, like Steven Jobs, once he was forced to leave his own company Apple when he was young. But he didn’t defeat. He tried to analyse himself and learn from his mistakes which made him out of his company, in order to fix this big problem, which was also his life turning point. Finally, after his efforts, he went back to his previous company. In this way, learning from the mistakes and the past could make us be better to fix the terribles. To sum up, I do think the reflection from the past could be really useful and helpful to our problems we are and will face, which allow us to use the experience and be more safe. So, there is no doubt that people should review the past.
As the living tempo quickens, there are a lot
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coming along with the development and amelioration of
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fix
the
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problems
in the present and the coming future,
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people
need to
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review
and learn from the
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past
we did. On the one hand
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people
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agree
with this statement since they
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think
the
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past
when we made
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mistakes
is our teachers.
However
, there is a considerable number of
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people
are in the opposite. In my opinion, I do
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agree
with this statement. Herbert. A. Simon said, the life without
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review
and reflection is not worth to
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live
.
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So
reviewing the
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past
could be great to
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help
us
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fix
problems.

First
, the
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experience
accumulated from the
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past
would
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help
us be more momentous and efficient to
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fix
the
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difficulies
of the present and the future.
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Some
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problems
we would
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meet
in the present or in the future are
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constructural
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similar
, which means that we could
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use
the wisdom and the
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experience
from the
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past
to figure out them. If we do not
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review
, we could never remember the
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experience
which might be useful and save time to
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fix
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problems
.
For example
, when I was in my undergraduate study, I choose math as my major at
first
.
However
, I
gradually
found it is painful to learn math. And then I
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begin
to
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review
the
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past
to figure out why I felt like that. Luckily I found the
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problem
is my study habits were not
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good
, which were
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similar
to the
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past
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problems
in my high school study. With the
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help
of the
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experience
that I obtained in my high school, I
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fixed
the
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problem
.
Therefore
,
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review
the
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could be
really
efficient to deal with the problems.

In
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addtion
, the
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mistakes
we had made in the
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past
could ensure us to be more confident in the
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similar
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stituation
. If we
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ignore
the
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mistakes
in the
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past
and do not
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review
them, it will be the same that we
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ingored
the price we had paid, which could
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allow
us to have
next
sad
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similar
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adveristy
.
For instance
, like Steven Jobs, once he
was forced
to
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leave
his
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own
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company
Apple when he was young.
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But
he didn’t defeat. He tried to
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analyse
himself and learn from his
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mistakes
which made him out of his
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company
, in order to
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fix
this
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big
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problem
, which was
also
his life turning point.
Finally
, after his efforts, he went back to his previous
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company
. In this way, learning from the
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mistakes
and the
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past
could
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make
us be better to
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fix
the
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terribles
.

To sum up, I do
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think
the reflection from the
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past
could be
really
useful and helpful to our
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problems
we are and will face, which
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allow
us to
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use
the
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experience
and be more safe.
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So
, there is no doubt that
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people
should
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review
the
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past
.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
54Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS essay To solve the problems of the present and the future, people should review the past. v. 518

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
488 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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