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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seem difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. v.508

Most experiences in our lives that seem difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. v. 508
“Life is a hard teacher” because it gives you a task first and teaches you later is the famous idiomatic phrases used by Robert Greene. Like this, words, the tasks or experiences that are facing at present can be difficult due to insufficient acknowledgement and unrecognized of relevant skill sets to achieve the tasks. However, as the time passes by, those challenged tasks and difficult experiences are becoming repetitive and relaxed with work, the theoretical part becomes recognized and which are worth memorize for the future. People always face the difficulties in life. They feel in this way because they are not used to master relevant skill sets. For example, when students start to work at a restaurant, it can be difficult for them, because they have not done or worked at a restaurant previously. However, students will eventually learn various skill sets such as communication, socialization, customer dealing skills as well as physical skills (serving dishes, counting the money and clean up the restaurants). From this example, we can conclude that, all people face the difficulties in life and that is hard to overcome because they have to master whole skill sets at once. In addition to this, all those tasks are becoming repetitive and people are becoming familiar with handling the tasks. That is when they realize the real value of the tasks. For instance, when students work at a company, the lessons they have learnt at a restaurant can be used and these are continuously useful for the future situations, because some of those skill sets learnt from restaurants are frequently used to complete the tasks at a company. Socialization, communication, customer skills are the specific skill sets that can be repetitive between two work places (restaurant and a company). As a result, as the challenged tasks are becoming familiar, the theoretical lessons behind the tasks are realized. In conclusion, the procedure to master of unknown tasks or experiences is challenging. But once the realization takes a place, the lessons and theoretical information are precious because it can be used for the future consequences.
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teacher”
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because
it gives you a
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task
first
and teaches you later is the
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famous
idiomatic phrases
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used
by Robert Greene. Like this, words, the
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tasks
or experiences that are facing at present can be difficult due to insufficient
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acknowledgement
and unrecognized of relevant
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skill
sets to achieve the
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tasks
.
However
, as the time passes by, those challenged
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tasks
and difficult experiences are becoming repetitive and relaxed with
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work
, the theoretical part becomes recognized and which are worth memorize for the future.

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People
always face the difficulties in life. They feel in this way
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because
they are not
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used
to master relevant
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skill
sets.
For example
, when students
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start
to
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work
at a
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restaurant
, it can be difficult for them,
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because
they have not done or worked at a
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restaurant
previously.
However
, students will
eventually
learn various
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skill
sets such as communication, socialization, customer dealing
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skills
as well
as physical
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skills
(serving dishes, counting the money and clean up the
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restaurants)
. From this example, we can conclude that, all
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people
face the difficulties in life and
that is
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hard
to overcome
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because
they
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have to
master whole
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skill
sets at once.

In addition
to this, all those
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tasks
are becoming repetitive and
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people
are becoming familiar with handling the
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tasks
.
That is
when they realize the real value of the
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tasks
.
For instance
, when students
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work
at a
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company
, the lessons they have
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learnt at
a
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restaurant
can be
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used
and these are
continuously
useful for the future situations,
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because
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some
of those
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skill
sets
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learnt
from
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restaurants
are
frequently
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used
to complete the
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tasks
at a
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company
. Socialization, communication, customer
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skills
are the specific
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skill
sets that can be repetitive between two
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work
places
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(restaurant
and a
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company
).
As a result
, as the challenged
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tasks
are becoming familiar, the theoretical lessons behind the
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tasks
are realized
.

In conclusion
, the procedure to master of unknown
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tasks
or experiences is challenging.
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But
once the realization takes a place, the lessons and theoretical information are precious
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because
it can be
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used
for the future consequences.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
30Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Most experiences in our lives that seem difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. v. 508

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
347 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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