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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer. v.169

Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer. v. 169
There is no doubt that the number of issues in regards to environmental hazards has drastically escalated due to harmful activities of mankind. Few individuals opine that regular people should be more mindful of environmental problems. However, opponents concede that government should be in charge of looking after ecology. This essay intends to delve into both conflicting sides with relevant examples prior to embarking on my perspective. Government plays a vital role in environmental improvement. To begin with, authority can control factories and impose law for the protection of the environment. For instance, in Canada factories are supported financially by supremacy and use environmentally friendly products to control contamination of the climate. Government has the power to build a sustainable and drastically efficient ecological improvement scheme to preserve the surroundings. However, the government cannot achieve conservation at an individual level. To start with, supremacy cannot implement laws and regulation forcefully on the individuals of this society. To exemplify, India is a democratic country and every person have their own rights and freedom to do anything with one’s wish. The government cannot change the habits of citizens in their daily lives to avoid the use of plastic bags to carry things. On the flip side, the individual is obligated to take care of the habitat. Firstly, people can start using glass products instead of plastics. For instance, the latest research elucidated that there has been a sharp decline in the number of environmental hazards in cities where people refused the usage of plastic. This step will stop production of plastics because of less demand in society. Moreover, people also limit their unnecessary paper, water, and electric usage resultantly smart usage of them will definitely save trees and water resources of our status. Conclusively, I believed that it is every individual’s responsibility to solve environmental problems, so every individual should encourage others to take responsibility for the environment.
There is no doubt that the number of issues
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environmental
hazards has
drastically
escalated due to harmful activities of mankind. Few
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individuals
opine that regular
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
should be more mindful of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environmental
problems.
However
, opponents concede that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
should be in charge of looking after ecology. This essay intends to delve into both conflicting sides with relevant examples prior to embarking on my perspective.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Government
plays a vital role in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environmental
improvement. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, authority can control factories and impose law for the protection of the environment.
For instance
, in Canada factories
are supported
financially
by supremacy and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
environmentally
friendly products to control contamination of the climate.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Government
has the power to build a sustainable and
drastically
efficient ecological improvement scheme to preserve the surroundings.

However
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
cannot achieve conservation at an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
individual
level. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
with, supremacy cannot implement laws and regulation
forcefully
on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
individuals
of this society. To exemplify, India is a democratic country and every person have their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
rights and freedom to do anything with one’s wish. The
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government
cannot
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the habits of citizens in their daily
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lives
to avoid the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
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plastic
bags to carry things.

On the flip side, the
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individual
is obligated
to take care of the habitat.
Firstly
,
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people
can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
using glass products
instead
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastics
.
For instance
, the latest research elucidated that there has been a sharp decline in the number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environmental
hazards in cities where
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
refused the usage of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastic
. This step will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
production of
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plastics
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of less demand in society.
Moreover
,
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people
also
limit their unnecessary paper, water, and electric usage
resultantly
smart usage of them will definitely save trees and water resources of our status.

Conclusively
, I believed that it is every
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individual’s
responsibility to solve
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environmental
problems,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
every
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individual
should encourage others to take responsibility for the environment.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer. v. 169

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
316 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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