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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The way a person dress reflects his/her characters. v.479

The way a person dress reflects his/her characters. v. 479
All people have taught do not judge a person by exterior factors, like appearance, height and dresses. It is undeniable that the first impression which is mainly from one’s look is of great importance. So, there is a question: can the ways people dresses reflects their characters? According to my perspective and observation, some characters can actually reveal by clothes. First of all, whether a person is loyal to disciplines and laws can see from their clothes. As we all know, it is accustomed for people to wear certain clothes under some special circumstances. Students, for instance, are required to wear school uniforms on campus. We can consider those who are reluctant to conform to this rules and choose to dress their own fancy clothes as rule-breakers. They are probably unwilling to following commands and rules and would like to have the courage to break the unsatisfied situation. Thus, their rebel characters show up from the way they dress. Secondly, dressing styles can tell altitudes about most everything from the person. There are plenty of thoughts and ideas about clothes from a person which are relevant to other things. If a person like casual clothes, wearing T-shirt, jeans and sneakers, he may be easy-going and carefree. By contrast, a person who always dresses up nice in the suit, he possibly is ambitious and workaholic. If he even wears leather shoes on weekends, he might have no time to relax and refresh himself. Only under huge pressure and anxiety can one dress like that all day. That is to say, dressing styles are imperative to judge a person. In addition, people who are crazy about fashionable clothing and like spending time dressing may be narcissistic. On campus or in workplaces, some people can change their outfits every day and all are in the latest trend. Most of them highly care about their looks. So it is better for others not to judge their appearance and clothes too much but to compliment. By analyzing the information, we can better know others people’s interesting and have a chance to better along well with others. In conclusion, people’s characters can truly expose by the way the dress. We can use this method to gain a great impression on others, as well as guess the characters of others. However, we should keep in minds that never draw a conclusion about a person only by their appearances.
All
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people
have taught do not judge a
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person
by exterior factors, like appearance, height and
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dresses
. It is undeniable that the
first
impression which is
mainly
from one’s look is of great importance.
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So
, there is a question: can the ways
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people
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dresses
reflects their
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characters
? According to my perspective and observation,
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some
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characters
can actually reveal by clothes.

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First of all
, whether a
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person
is loyal to disciplines and laws can
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see
from their
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clothes
. As we all know, it
is accustomed
for
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people
to wear certain
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clothes
under
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some
special circumstances. Students,
for instance
,
are required
to wear school uniforms on campus. We can consider those who are reluctant to conform to
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this
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rules
and choose to
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dress
their
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own
fancy
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clothes
as
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rule
-breakers. They are
probably
unwilling to following commands and
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rules
and would like to have the courage to break the unsatisfied situation.
Thus
, their rebel
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characters
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show
up from the way they dress.

Secondly
, dressing styles can
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tell
altitudes about most everything from the
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person
. There are
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plenty
of thoughts and
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ideas
about
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clothes
from a
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person
which are relevant to
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other
things. If a
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person
like casual
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clothes
, wearing T-shirt, jeans and sneakers, he may be easy-going and carefree. By contrast, a
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person
who always
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dresses
up nice in the suit, he
possibly
is ambitious and workaholic. If he even wears leather shoes on weekends, he might have no time to relax and refresh himself.
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Only
under huge pressure and anxiety can one
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dress
like that all day.
That is
to say, dressing styles are imperative to judge a person.

In addition
,
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people
who are crazy about fashionable clothing and like spending time dressing may be narcissistic. On campus or in workplaces,
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some
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people
can
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change
their outfits every day and all are in the latest trend. Most of them
highly
care about their looks.
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So
it is better for others not to judge their appearance and
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clothes
too much
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but
to compliment. By analyzing the information, we can better know others
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people’s
interesting and have a chance to better along well with others.

In conclusion
,
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people’s
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characters
can
truly
expose by
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the way the
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dress
. We can
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use
this method to gain a great impression on others,
as well
as guess the
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characters
of others.
However
, we should
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keep
in minds that never draw a conclusion about a
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person
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only
by their appearances.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS essay The way a person dress reflects his/her characters. v. 479

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
401 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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