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Some people prefer to work for a big company Others prefer to work for a small company Which one would you prefer Use specific reasons to support your choice v.2

Some people prefer to work for a big company Others prefer to work for a small company Which one would you prefer Use specific reasons to support your choice v. 2
Some people choose a job in a big and prominent companies. However, others prefer to work for a small and local company. I consider myself one of the those people, who prefer to work for well-know and international companies. A big company’s work experience prevails small local company’s work experience due to its convincing advantages. It should be noted that international and big companies have several upsides such as advanced qualification trainings and promotions, have an opportunity to transfer to another abroad branches, meet a popular qualified professionals and have trustable work experience. Firstly, a big and international work environment gives various and comprehensive experience which is sufficient in the job market. Moreover, this kind of companies usually provide high quality qualification trainings for its employees. Secondly, there is an opportunity to travel and to promote easily and to transfer to abroad branches and see another style of work and be more qualified. For instance, it is statistically proved that the employees who work in various work environments, has high ability to solve a complicated problems rather than employees who work in a local small companies. On the other hand, there are not many big and international companies in every country. Generally, this kind of companies are located in the capital cities and people who live in the vicinity or countryside area has not a chance to work there. Hence, a small and local companies play key role in the case. Additionally, a graduate students who has not any work experience usually start their career in the local and small organizations. Because, firsthand experience is important for future development. However, it is observed that local and small companies’ employees express their dissatisfaction due to lack of trainings, low salary, lack of promotions etc. If we look of both options, it is clearly seen that working in the big company brings enormous number of benefits and personally if I have two of these options, then my decision should be the big and international company.
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.
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, others prefer to
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work
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small
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local
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. I consider myself one of the those
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work
for well-know and
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international
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work
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experience
prevails
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small
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local
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company’s
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work
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experience
due to its convincing advantages. It should
be noted
that
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international
and
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big
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companies
have several upsides such as advanced qualification trainings and promotions, have an opportunity to transfer to another abroad branches,
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meet
a popular qualified professionals and have trustable
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work
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experience
.
Firstly
, a
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big
and
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international
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work
environment gives various and comprehensive
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experience
which is sufficient in the job market.
Moreover
, this kind of
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companies
usually
provide high quality qualification trainings for its
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employees
.
Secondly
, there is an opportunity to travel and to promote
easily
and to transfer to abroad branches and
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see
another style of
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work
and be more qualified.
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, it is
statistically
proved that the
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employees
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who
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work
in various
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work
environments, has high ability to solve a complicated
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problems
rather
than
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employees
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who
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work
in a
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local
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small
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companies
.

On the other hand
, there are not
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many
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and
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companies
in every country.
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, this kind of
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companies
are located
in the capital cities and
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people
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live
in the vicinity or countryside area has not a chance to
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work
there.
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, a
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small
and
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local
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play key role in the case.
Additionally
, a graduate
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students
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has
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usually
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is
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important
for future development.
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, it
is observed
that
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local
and
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small
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companies’
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employees
express their dissatisfaction due to lack of trainings, low salary, lack of promotions etc.

If we look of both options, it is
clearly
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seen
that working in the
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big
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company
brings enormous number of benefits and
personally
if I have two of these options, then my decision should be the
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and
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international
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company
.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
63Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people prefer to work for a big company Others prefer to work for a small company Which one would you prefer Use specific reasons to support your choice v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
333 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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