Print and digital media have evolved from being less dominant in the 20th century to becoming a monopoly in the 21st century. Since then these platforms have started to indulge in the internal affairs of popular personalities. While these practices have a detrimental effect on people, which makes them to lose their peace. This essay will completely agree the media involvement in personal lives and in addition it explains the purpose behind following them and justifies by providing required examples.
Firstly, celebrities are now-a-days followed by people all the time and this makes them hard to live their own life. Curiosity to understand what they do apart from their career has led reports to always follow them 24/7. For example, Virat being one of the best batsmen, people tend to follow his work ethics and recent Times Now has covered a documentary about it. Hence, eager to know their superstars has led media to focus more on their day to day lives.
On the other hand, focusing on internal matters of celebrities causes various negative effects which make their life harder. They loose their peace because they are exposed publicly. To illustrate it better, Benzima had lost his spot in the national team because of the media exposing his personal matters in public. Hence, Media involvement in personal lives isn't a good sign for people who experience it.
To conclude, in my opinion media has completely taken over each individual's personal life. Although, it has many disadvantages but it also has few advantages. Therefor this essay discussed the purpose behind media platforms in involving in public figures' life and also justified the effects that it can probably causes due to past experience.
Print and digital
media
have evolved from being less dominant in the 20th century to becoming a monopoly in the 21st century.
Since
then these platforms have
started
to indulge in the internal affairs of popular personalities. While these practices have a detrimental effect on
people
, which
makes
them to lose their peace. This essay will completely
agree
the
media
involvement in
personal
lives
and
in addition
it
explains
the purpose behind following them and justifies by providing required examples.
Firstly
, celebrities are
now
-a-days followed by
people
all the time and this
makes
them
hard
to
live
their
own
life
. Curiosity to understand what they do apart from their career has led reports to always follow them 24/7.
For example
,
Virat
being one of the best batsmen,
people
tend to follow his work ethics and recent Times
Now
has covered a documentary about it.
Hence
, eager to know their superstars has led
media
to focus more on their
day to day
lives
.
On the other hand
, focusing on internal matters of celebrities causes various
negative
effects which
make
their
life
harder. They
loose
their peace
because
they
are exposed
publicly
. To illustrate it better,
Benzima
had lost his spot in the national team
because
of the
media
exposing his
personal
matters in public.
Hence
,
Media
involvement in
personal
lives
isn't a
good
sign
for
people
who experience it.
To conclude
, in my opinion
media
has completely taken over each individual's
personal
life
. Although, it has
many
disadvantages
but
it
also
has few advantages. Therefor this essay discussed the purpose behind
media
platforms
in involving in
public figures'
life
and
also
justified the effects that it can
probably
causes
due to
past experience
.
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