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Talk about skill that takes time to learn. What is it? How it is beneficial? How long it takes to learn? v.1

Talk about skill that takes time to learn. What is it? How it is beneficial? How long it takes to learn? v. 1
Language is the important for communication with each other. Many times, some problems happen due to the speaking foreign languages. Indigenous people speak a foreign sound so other people cannot understand very well. Alien dialect can cause some problems such as social problems as well as practical problems. I firmly agree with this statement. I shall discuss my views in the forthcoming paragraphs. On the one hand, speaking a foreign jargon cause many problems such as social problems because every person cannot understand a foreign word, therefore, misunderstanding happens in the conversation. Furthermore, the alien vocabulary creates practical problems. In some of the native company employers always put their best efforts to speak with their colleagues in the native expression. Sometimes people use foreign voice so another's faces the understanding problems and it would affect the work which they do. On the other hand, people should speak a foreign wording which helps the mental horizon. In recent times, people move to abroad for their job and academic study, therefore if they speak with others then their skill would be improved. Many people working in multinational companies so speaking an alien expression are important to communicate with other clients. People speak a foreign phrase with their high and king then they would be learned from them. In conclusion, speaking a foreign phrase has own advantages and disadvantage. Speaking a foreign terminology helps people to improve communication and other skill while with native people speak a others speech expect to native accent lead some of the problems such as social and practical problems.
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other
.
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times,
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some
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problems
happen due to the speaking
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foreign
languages. Indigenous
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people
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speak
a
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sound
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so
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other
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people
cannot understand
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very
well. Alien dialect can cause
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some
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problems
such as social
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problems
as well
as practical
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problems
. I
firmly
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agree
with this statement. I shall discuss my views in the forthcoming paragraphs.

On the one hand, speaking a
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foreign
jargon cause
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many
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problems
such as social
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problems
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because
every person cannot understand a
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foreign
word,
therefore
, misunderstanding happens in the conversation.
Furthermore
, the alien vocabulary creates practical
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problems
. In
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some of the
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native
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company
employers always put their best efforts to
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speak
with their colleagues in the
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native
expression.
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Sometimes
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people
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use
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foreign
voice
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so
another's faces the understanding
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problems
and it would affect the work which they do.

On the
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other
hand,
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people
should
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speak
a
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foreign
wording which
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helps
the mental horizon. In recent times,
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people
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move
to abroad for their job and academic study,
therefore
if they
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speak
with others then their
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skill
would be
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improved
.
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Many
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people
working in multinational
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companies
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so
speaking an alien expression are
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important
to communicate with
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other
clients.
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People
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speak
a
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foreign
phrase with their high and king then they would
be learned
from them.

In conclusion
, speaking a
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foreign
phrase has
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own
advantages and disadvantage. Speaking a
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foreign
terminology
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helps
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people
to
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improve
communication and
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other
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skill
while with
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native
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people
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speak
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a
others speech
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expect
to
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native
accent lead
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some of the
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problems
such as social and practical
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problems
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Talk about skill that takes time to learn. What is it? How it is beneficial? How long it takes to learn? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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