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do you agree or disagree? Imagine that a professor requires students to learn as much as possible about a subject in a short period of life, is it better for the professor to require students to work together in a group or alone? v.167

Imagine that a professor requires students to learn as much as possible about a subject in a short period of life, is it better for the professor to require students to work together in a group or alone? v. 167
Imagine that a professor requires students to learn as much as possible about a subject in a short period of life, now the question is whether it is better for the professor to require students to work together in a group or alone. Everyone with regard to his private features can maintain a specific direction toward this issue, however in my perspective, the advantages which teamwork will bring to us outweigh to working alone. My arguments and reasons are listed below which will strengthen my point of view: To begin with, needless to say that being alone requires a lot of energy and time. It is plausible that you can avoid from overwhelming with several opinions; however let' s try to observe other side of coin. Since there are some members in a group, this opportunity of sharing experiences and ideas will be created by members. As the old saying goes several hands will act better than one hand, consequently a group gives a chance to us to consider to other pros and cons of project. The second reason why I advocate a group lies the fact of saving time. It is noticeable that the most striking factors in a group are an appropriate schedule and a leader who has a potential ability for dividing labor. One- who works alone- should, nevertheless, consider to mass of project. It goes without saying that a project requires numerous activities like searching for resources, selecting the best parts of resources, translating, interviewing with famous professors or other person, going to institutions and companies for getting information, editing and final evaluating and presenting in the class; hence the role of group in cooperation and participation and saving time will be clear here. Besides all these arguments, I am inclined to provide a bit of different point. Working in the group can improve interpersonal skills' of members. Take for example a shy person who is forced to work in a group; spontaneously he has to connect with other people in this way. Gradually this man will be able to optimize his personality; consequently this is another benefit of teamwork. By taking all above mentioned arguments, this conclusion could be drawn that a group due to attendance of different people with diverse backgrounds will be worthwhile because it not only can reduce waste time and selfish feeling, but also it is able to affect on students' function in class in providing creative ideas. یخ غ
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now
the question is whether it is better for the professor to
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require
students to work together in a
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group
or
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alone
. Everyone with regard to his private features can maintain a specific direction toward this issue,
however
in my perspective, the advantages which teamwork will bring to us outweigh to working
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alone
. My arguments and reasons
are listed
below which will strengthen my point of view:

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with, needless to say that being
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alone
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requires
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a lot of
energy and
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time
. It is plausible that you can avoid from overwhelming with several opinions;
however
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let&
#039; s try to observe
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other
side of coin. Since there are
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some
members in a
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group
, this opportunity of sharing experiences and
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ideas
will
be created
by members. As the
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old
saying goes several hands will act better than one hand,
consequently
a
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group
gives a chance to us to consider to
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other
pros and cons of project.

The second reason why I advocate a
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group
lies the fact of saving
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time
. It is noticeable that the most striking factors in a
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group
are an appropriate schedule and a leader who has a potential ability for dividing labor. One- who works
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alone-
should,
nevertheless
, consider to mass of project. It goes without saying that a project
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requires
numerous activities like searching for resources, selecting the best parts of resources, translating, interviewing with
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famous
professors or
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other
person, going to institutions and
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companies
for getting information, editing and final evaluating and presenting in the
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class
;
hence
the role of
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group
in cooperation and participation and saving
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time
will be
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clear
here.

Besides
all these arguments, I
am inclined
to provide a bit of
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different
point. Working in the
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group
can
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improve
interpersonal
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skills&
#039; of members. Take
for example
a shy person who
is forced
to work in a
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group
;
spontaneously
he
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has to
connect with
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other
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people
in this way.
Gradually
this
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man
will be able to optimize his personality;
consequently
this is another benefit of teamwork.

By taking all above mentioned arguments, this conclusion could
be drawn
that a
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group
due to attendance of
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different
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people
with diverse backgrounds will be worthwhile
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because
it not
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only
can
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reduce
waste
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time
and selfish feeling,
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but
also
it is able to
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affect
on
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students&
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class
in providing creative
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ideas
.

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IELTS essay Imagine that a professor requires students to learn as much as possible about a subject in a short period of life, is it better for the professor to require students to work together in a group or alone? v. 167

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
408 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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