Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position. v.160
Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position. v. 160
It is believed by some people that children are ought to always stay with their families when they have free time. However, others argue that this habit has a detrimental effect. Although each argument has its own advantages, I believe that it is unnecessary for children to spend all their free time with their families and that they should be given freedom to have fun in safe environments with their peers.
On the one hand, when children spend time exclusively with their parents, be them guardians or foster parents, their bond grows stronger. Children would start viewing their parents as their role models, and thus, absorb conventions and codes of conduct that are essential for the child’s development from them. Hopefully, this would ensure that children do not engage in bullying, truancy, or delinquency when they grow up. Additionally, being present with their families the whole time can protect children from dangers, for example, abduction.
On the other hand, this habit can adversely affect the development of the child. If children socialized with their families only and were not permitted to see other children their age, this would result in them developing social anxiety and even being too dependent on their parents. Moreover, working parents are not always present in the house and, thus, cannot always take care of the child.
To conclude, spending an adequate amount of time with their families is essential for healthy bonding and the development of the child. However, they should not be restricted to being with their families only, and instead be allowed to socialize with other well brought-up peers and engage in healthy and entertaining activities supervised by their parents.
It
is believed
by
some
people
that
children
are ought to always stay with their
families
when they have free
time
.
However
, others argue that this habit has a detrimental effect. Although each argument has its
own
advantages, I believe that it is unnecessary for
children
to spend all their free
time
with their
families
and that they should be
given
freedom to have fun in safe environments with their peers.
On the one hand, when
children
spend
time
exclusively with their
parents
, be them guardians or foster
parents
, their bond grows stronger.
Children
would
start
viewing their
parents
as their role models, and
thus
, absorb conventions and codes of conduct that are essential for the child’s development from them.
Hopefully
, this would ensure that
children
do not engage in bullying, truancy, or delinquency when they grow up.
Additionally
, being present with their
families
the whole
time
can protect
children
from
dangers
,
for example
, abduction.
On the
other
hand, this habit can
adversely
affect the development of the child. If
children
socialized with their
families
only
and were not permitted to
see
other
children
their age, this would result in them developing social anxiety and even being too dependent on their
parents
.
Moreover
, working
parents
are not always present in the
house
and,
thus
, cannot always take care of the child.
To conclude
, spending an adequate amount of
time
with their
families
is essential for healthy bonding and the development of the child.
However
, they should not
be restricted
to being with their
families
only
, and
instead
be
allowed
to socialize with
other
well brought-up peers and engage in healthy and entertaining activities supervised by their
parents
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes