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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position. v.16

Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position. v. 16
Learning anything new is quite interesting and it develops the sense of curiosity among people. Though some people believe that burdening children to learn additional language is not necessary, I feel that it is important. This essay amplifies the same opinion with related examples. Firstly, it is a proven fact, that learning a fresh language improves the intellectual abilities. Inculcating the habit at a very young age, sharpens their mind and also enhances their learning capability. Juveniles would grab a chance to enrich their linguistic potential alongside their creative abilities. For example, an article written in Times Of India, states that innovative contemplation and logical reasoning intensifies in infants by studying unknown languages from a very young age. Secondly, nomadic life is gaining its popularity among public these days. With increasing opportunities across the world, individuals are fascinated about the idea of moving across the globe. Language restriction would never be a barrier for children, provided they learn foreign languages as a child. For example, Indians have an edge over Chinese to grab opportunities in the field of software in the United States because of common language. Though, it might become a burden sometimes for children to absorb an alien tongue, it is often beneficial considering that it enhances the smartness and also provides ample chances for growth. So I would like to recommend to teach new dialect to children as it increases their skills and also allows them to pursue the career they wish for, without a second thought of the language barrier.
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people
. Though
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some
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people
believe that burdening
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children
to learn additional
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language
is not necessary, I feel that it is
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important
. This essay amplifies the same opinion with related examples.

Firstly
, it is a proven fact, that learning a fresh
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language
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improves
the intellectual abilities.

Inculcating the habit at a
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very
young age, sharpens their mind and
also
enhances their learning capability. Juveniles would grab a chance to enrich their linguistic potential alongside their creative abilities.
For example
, an article written in Times Of India, states that innovative contemplation and logical reasoning intensifies in infants by studying unknown
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languages
from a
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very
young age.

Secondly
, nomadic life is gaining its popularity among public these days. With increasing opportunities across the world, individuals
are fascinated
about the
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idea
of moving across the globe.
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Language
restriction would never be a barrier for
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children
, provided they learn foreign
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languages
as a child.
For example
, Indians have an edge over Chinese to grab opportunities in the field of software in the United States
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because
of common language.

Though, it might become a burden
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sometimes
for
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children
to absorb an alien tongue, it is
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often
beneficial considering that it enhances the smartness and
also
provides ample chances for growth.
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So
I would like to
The verb 'recommend' is used with the gerund form: "recommend teaching".
recommend to teach
new dialect to
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children
as it increases their
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skills
and
also
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allows
them to pursue the career they wish for, without a second
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thought
of the
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language
barrier.
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IELTS essay Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position. v. 16

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
254 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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