Charity workers who work for a noble cause should extend their helping hands to the needy and underprivileged people all over the world. However, some people think that they should look after their own countries. I strongly disagree that one's own country should be considered leaving other countries behind.
Philanthropic or charity works should aim to assist people irrespective of race, gender, nationality. Some countries are rich and other's are very poor, and therefore, the organisations in wealthy nations could be of great help to the weak and destitute people of African countries. This would develop a sense of brotherhood among different nations. Moreover, this could be of great help for wealth distribution between various nations on the planet. Many philanthropists such as the US actress Angelina Jolie or Entrepreneur Bill Gates are known to provide help to various people who live in different parts of the world.
On the other hand, if people contribute to their country only, then it can give rise to problems concerning the distribution of charity. The ultra-rich countries of the Middle-East and Europe needs extremely less help compared to the poor and developing nations of Africa and South-Asia, where many people live below the poverty line. Also, the humanitarian aids must be provided for all the people of the world and should not be concentrated in a particular area because it is our social responsibility to help every human being in all possible ways.
The charity foundations should show their generosity to every needy person and not just their own citizens. I believe, when nations help each other it can lead to stronger bonds and help to eliminate many issues around the globe.
Charity
workers who work for a noble cause should extend their helping hands to the needy and underprivileged
people
all over the world.
However
,
some
people
think
that they should look after their
own
countries
. I
strongly
disagree that one's
own
country
should
be considered
leaving other
countries
behind.
Philanthropic or
charity
works should aim to assist
people
irrespective of race, gender, nationality.
Some
countries
are rich and
other's
are
very
poor, and
therefore
, the
organisations
in wealthy
nations
could be of great
help
to the weak and destitute
people
of African
countries
. This would develop a sense of brotherhood among
different
nations
.
Moreover
, this could be of great
help
for wealth distribution between various
nations
on the planet.
Many
philanthropists such as the US actress Angelina Jolie or Entrepreneur Bill Gates
are known
to provide
help
to various
people
who
live
in
different
parts of the world.
On the other hand
, if
people
contribute to their
country
only
, then it can give rise to problems concerning the distribution of
charity
. The ultra-rich
countries
of the Middle-East and Europe needs
extremely
less
help
compared to the poor and developing
nations
of Africa and South-Asia, where
many
people
live
below the poverty line.
Also
, the humanitarian aids
must
be provided
for all the
people
of the world and should not
be concentrated
in a particular area
because
it is our social responsibility to
help
every human being in all possible ways.
The
charity
foundations should
show
their generosity to every needy person and not
just
their
own
citizens. I believe, when
nations
help
each other it can lead to stronger bonds and
help
to eliminate
many
issues around the globe.
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