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Do you agree or disagree with following statement? Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. v.14

Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. v. 14
From the down side of humanity education from school to university has played an essential and unavoidable role in people' s life which is much talked about not only by sociologist but also other open minded citizens. Consequently, the context of education and curriculum are a hotspot in every academic life either for society or people. It has been hard to reach a consensus about what teacher must teach in their classroom. From my own perspective, I strongly agree with the statement and I will explicate my chief reasons through the following paragraphs. To commence, the first exquisite point that deserves to be mentioned is that students attend schools for learning some skills or knowledge that are related to their future life and career. Hence, teachers must focus on teaching basic skills such as math, history, art, and etc. in order to help students for choosing their best major in the future. Another equally reason why I agree with the statement is that social or political concepts are not suitable for students and these contexts must be debate at universities. To illustrate, for example my cousin who is eleven years old, always has some unusual questions about the political or social views that his teachers mention at the classrooms. His parents and other members of family cannot answer his questions due to his lack of knowledge. The last but not the least reason justifying the claim is that teachers' social and political views may be wrong or against the society views. The noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistics, recently conducted social research, demonstrates that more that 80 percent of families could not clear the wrong social or political concepts and views from their children' mind after graduating from schools. Therefore, children grow with wrong and negative views about their society that may have irrecoverable results in their future. To wrap it up, as aforementioned argument, bringing up teachers' social or political views is not beneficial or essential due to the fact that their views can be wrong or opposite of the goals of the society and this context could be inappropriate for students. This was the story in a nutshell; there are many reasons and examples, supporting the claims, which are not mentioned above. All in all, I firmly recommend that government, hand in hand with, schools must control the educational context at schools and universities which are related to concept of society.
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of humanity education from
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to university has played an essential and unavoidable role in
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open minded
citizens.
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, the
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context
of education and curriculum are a hotspot in every academic life either for
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society
or
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people
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teacher
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teach in their classroom. From my
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strongly
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through the following paragraphs.

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first
exquisite point that deserves to
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is that
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students
attend
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schools
for learning
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some
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skills
or knowledge that
are related
to their future life and career.
Hence
,
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teachers
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must
focus on teaching basic
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skills
such as math, history, art,
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and etc
. in order to
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help
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students
for choosing their best major in the future.

Another
equally
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reason
why I
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agree
with the statement is that
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social
or political concepts are not suitable for
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students
and these
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contexts
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must
be debate at universities. To illustrate,
for example
my cousin who is eleven years
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old
, always has
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some
unusual questions about the political or
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social
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views
that his
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teachers
mention at the classrooms. His parents and other members of family cannot answer his questions due to his lack of knowledge.

The last
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justifying the claim is that
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teachers&
#039;
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social
and political
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views
may be
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wrong
or against the
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society
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views
. The noteworthy
refreshingly
intelligible statistics, recently conducted
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social
research, demonstrates that more that 80 percent of families could not
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clear
the
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wrong
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social
or political concepts and
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views
from their
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children&
#039; mind after graduating from
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schools
.
Therefore
, children grow with
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wrong
and
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negative
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views
about their
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society
that may have irrecoverable results in their future.

To wrap it up, as aforementioned argument, bringing up
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teachers&
#039;
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social
or political
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views
is not beneficial or essential due to the fact that their
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views
can be
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wrong
or opposite of the goals of the
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society
and this
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context
could be inappropriate for
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students
. This was the story in a nutshell; there are
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many
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reasons
and examples, supporting the claims, which are not mentioned above. All in all, I
firmly
recommend that
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government
, hand in hand with,
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schools
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must
control the educational
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context
at
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schools
and universities which
are related
to concept of
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society
.
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IELTS essay Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. v. 14

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
401 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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