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Do you agree or disagree the following statement One quality that a successful leader must have is to make decision quickly when a leader takes too much time to make decisions he will be seen as ineffective to the people he lead v.2

One quality that a successful leader must have is to make decision quickly when a leader takes too much time to make decisions he will be seen as ineffective to the people he lead v. 2
In today’s competitive world, leading has been counting a tedious and challenging job. A top-notch leader is one who makes the most profitable decision in various circumstances. A forerunner possesses a variety of qualities ranging from humility to honesty. Although it is opined by some that the more quickly a leader makes a decision, the more successful will be, this essay is trying to refute this notion. Throughout the following paragraphs, among the most predominant reasons in support of this contention heightening the accuracy and becoming aware of alternative solutions will be meticulously scrutinized to advocate this standpoint that if a chief is not fast in making the decision, he will not be seen as ineffective to the people who lead. To commence with, in most cases there is a trade-off between speed-accuracy. An erudite boss should weigh the advantages and downsides of the matter from a different lens. It is obvious that faster decisions are more likely to encounter flaws, so a knowledgeable chief must precisely investigate the cons and pros of a viewpoint before making a result. A vivid example can be given to shed light on what has elaborated above. Here, I depict one of my own experiences. When I was working in the Harvard Lab. , the dean asked me to offer advice to boost the internet’s infrastructure, because I was a computer whiz, on the spur of the moment I gave an opinion that not only needed much more time and cost but also there were diverse possible solutions with lower cost. Accordingly, in most of the hectic situations and academic cases, it takes time to reach the best choices. Furthermore, time passing helps a leader to face with other alternative approaches and different windows of opportunities. Undoubtedly, the initial solution is not the best solution and the chief should hold meetings to be acquainted with other possible viewpoints. To more clarify the condition, I mention the outcome of one survey conducted at Harvard School to probe the impact of the time passing on students’ decisions. Over 85% of the participants believed that throughout the time they readily overcome their stresses and after scrutiny, they depict the best answer. Therefore, not only time passing helps to relieve the tension but also it supports us to meet other postulates that become tangible toward the end of the deadlines. To recapitulate, I pen down saying that it is true that being fast has been counted as an outstanding trait but there are more benefits for leaders to make decisions throughout time and also, there is a conflict between being fast and effective.
In
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today
’s competitive world, leading has been counting a tedious and challenging job. A top-notch
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leader
is one who
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makes
the most profitable
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decision
in various circumstances. A forerunner possesses a variety of qualities ranging from humility to honesty. Although it
is opined
by
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some
that the more
quickly
a
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leader
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makes
a
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decision
, the more successful will be, this essay is trying to refute this notion. Throughout the following paragraphs, among the most predominant reasons in support of this contention heightening the accuracy and becoming aware of alternative
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solutions
will be
meticulously
scrutinized to advocate this standpoint that if a chief is not
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fast
in making the
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decision
, he will not be
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seen
as ineffective to the
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people
who lead.

To commence with,
in most cases
there is a trade-off between speed-accuracy. An erudite boss should weigh the advantages and downsides of the matter from a
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different
lens. It is obvious that faster
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decisions
are more likely to encounter flaws,
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so
a knowledgeable chief
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must
precisely
investigate the cons and pros of a viewpoint
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before
making a result. A vivid example can be
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given
to shed light on what has elaborated above. Here, I depict one of my
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own
experiences.
“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
I was working in the Harvard Lab.
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,
the dean asked me to offer advice to boost the internet’s infrastructure,
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because
I was a computer whiz, on the spur of the moment I gave an opinion that not
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only
needed much more
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time
and cost
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but
also
there were diverse possible
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solutions
with lower cost.
Accordingly
, in most of the hectic situations and academic cases, it takes
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time
to reach the best choices.

Furthermore
,
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time
passing
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helps
a
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leader
to face with other alternative approaches and
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different
windows of opportunities.
Undoubtedly
, the initial
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solution
is not the best
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solution
and the chief should hold meetings to
be acquainted
with other possible viewpoints. To more clarify the condition, I mention the outcome of one survey conducted at Harvard School to probe the impact of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
passing on students’
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decisions
. Over 85% of the participants believed that throughout the
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time
they
readily
overcome their
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stresses
and after scrutiny, they depict the best answer.
Therefore
, not
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only
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time
passing
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helps
to relieve the tension
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but
also
it supports us to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
other postulates that become tangible toward the
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end
of the deadlines.

To recapitulate, I pen down saying that it is true that being
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
has
been counted
as an outstanding trait
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but
there are more benefits for
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leaders
to
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make
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decisions
throughout
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time
and
also
, there is a conflict between being
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
and effective.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay One quality that a successful leader must have is to make decision quickly when a leader takes too much time to make decisions he will be seen as ineffective to the people he lead v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
435 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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