It is an undeniable fact that sports has been one of the reasons, bringing honour to every country at International level. However, it has been debated for long that authorities invest more to assist these events which should rather be used in providing facilities to the general public. I strongly agree with this and shall be discussing it further.
Sports is braced and encouraged by the ministry be it for the World cup or at the Olympics and profoundly supported by the citizens as it is a matter of pride. For instance, it is essential that sportsmen undergo trainings with new techniques and practice using best sporting equipment which requires monetary assistance. To compete at a global level they need leading quality of clothes and kits. Moreover, it is essential that sportsmen are encouraged to give their best by providing them with the excellent schooling.
On the other hand, while huge investments are made by the state which can also be done by Non-governmental organisations than aiding to provide better amenities for people. For example, the administration needs to focus more on issues like high unemployment by creating job opportunities for educated youth conducting job fairs at a global scale. They also need to consider the condition of roads and implement ways in which they could improve it facilitating easy transport. It will lead to steady development and growth of the nation.
Although, sports have been a vital part of our society, causing thrill among the nationals. It enhances one physically, emotionally and mentally. Nevertheless, it is the jurisdictions duty to make sure to balance costs nationwide. In my opinion, I completely agree that it is essential that legislation offers more aid to locals ensuring comfortable life and benefits.
It is an undeniable fact that sports has been one of the reasons, bringing
honour
to every country at International level.
However
, it has
been debated
for long that authorities invest more to assist these
events
which should
rather
be
used
in providing facilities to the
general public
. I
strongly
agree
with this and shall be discussing it
further
.
Sports
is braced
and encouraged by the ministry be it for the World cup or at the Olympics and
profoundly
supported by the citizens as it is a matter of pride.
For instance
, it is essential that sportsmen undergo trainings with new techniques and practice using best sporting equipment which requires monetary assistance. To compete at a global level they need leading quality of clothes and kits.
Moreover
, it is essential that sportsmen
are encouraged
to give their best by providing them with the excellent schooling.
On the other hand
, while huge investments
are made
by the state which can
also
be done
by Non-governmental
organisations
than aiding to provide better amenities for
people
.
For example
, the administration needs to focus more on issues like high unemployment by creating job opportunities for educated youth conducting job fairs at a global scale. They
also
need to consider the condition of roads and implement ways in which they could
improve
it facilitating easy transport. It will lead to steady development and growth of the nation.
Although, sports have been a vital part of our society, causing thrill among the nationals. It enhances one
physically
,
emotionally
and mentally.
Nevertheless
, it is the
jurisdictions
duty to
make
sure to balance costs nationwide. In my opinion, I completely
agree
that it is essential that legislation offers more aid to locals ensuring comfortable life and benefits.
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