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Disposing of waste on streets has become a common problem in many countries these days. What are the cause and solutions of this issue? v.1

Disposing of waste on streets has become a common problem in many countries these days. What are the cause and solutions of this issue? v. 1
Without a doubt, it is increasingly common these days to see some people dumping their misuse on the streets. This essay will explore the reasons for this trend and propose measures which might address them. One of the main reasons for this worrying phenomenon is a lack of consideration of the polluters for the town's cleanliness. This is because some people have not been taught that it is also their responsibility to keep the town clean. For instance, some people casually throw their rubbish on the streets without a second thought of its impact on the immediate surroundings. To tackle this issue, aggressive sensitisation campaigns on misuse disposal should be implemented by the city council or the government. This would curb the activities of careless misuse disposal on the roads. Another contributing factor is the lack of adequate dumping sites. With increasing consumption comes a corresponding rise in the amount of misuse produced. If there are insufficient dumping grounds in a populated area, people have no other choice than to dump their rubbish on the streets which is more convenient to them. This problem could be mitigated if the government designated as suitable sites where garbage could be dumped. Townsfolk would then be required to use those sites. In conclusion, the lack of consideration of some citizens and insufficient dumping areas are two of the main causes of misuse disposal on the streets. However, these issues can be mitigated by government actions in terms of sensitisation campaigns and provision of dumping sites.
Without a doubt, it is
increasingly
common these days to
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see
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some
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people
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dumping
their
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misuse
on the
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streets
. This essay will explore the reasons for this trend and propose measures which might address them.

One of the main reasons for this worrying phenomenon is a lack of consideration of the polluters for the town's cleanliness. This is
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because
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some
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people
have not
been taught
that it is
also
their responsibility to
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keep
the town clean.
For instance
,
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some
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people
casually
throw their rubbish on the
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streets
without a second
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thought
of its impact on the immediate surroundings. To tackle this issue, aggressive
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sensitisation
campaigns on
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misuse
disposal should
be implemented
by the city council or the
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government
. This would curb the activities of careless
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
misuse
disposal on the roads.

Another contributing factor is the lack of adequate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dumping
sites. With increasing consumption
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comes
a corresponding rise in the amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
misuse
produced. If there are insufficient
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dumping
grounds in a populated area,
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people
have no other choice than to dump their rubbish on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
streets
which is more convenient to them. This problem could
be mitigated
if the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
designated as suitable sites where garbage could
be dumped
. Townsfolk would then
be required
to
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use
those sites.

In conclusion
, the lack of consideration of
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some
citizens and insufficient
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dumping
areas are two of the main causes of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
misuse
disposal on the
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streets
.
However
, these issues can
be mitigated
by
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government
actions in terms of
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sensitisation
campaigns and provision of
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dumping
sites.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Disposing of waste on streets has become a common problem in many countries these days. What are the cause and solutions of this issue? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
252 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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