Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of playing sports and participating in physical exercises v.1
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of playing sports and participating in physical exercises v. 1
Our world has been developed very fast and in the most modern way. Because of that, almost all factories and companies or farms around the world apply new technology machines instead of human. These machines have been applied in processing of food, clothes, accessories, cultivation even the most difficult and complex things effectively. This is the best way to achieve the purposes in business, but it also has many disadvantages.
On one hand, using machines can help factories solve the manpower shortage issue easily. One of the most important benefits of this trend is the big profits it brings back. For example, we don't have to share too much profits to pay salary for workers and machine will do some work faster than human so we can do more work in the same time. Furthermore, because a high technology machine can work fast and exactly, we can reduce time-consuming too.
On the other hand, the price of them is not small. We can say that they are expensive. Although, today it is the newest but after 2 or 3 year, it can be out of trend easily due to the fast development. In addition, if we are tricked, we will get the fake or low quality machines. Sometimes, these machines are out of warranty and broken down so we have to pay an amount of money to get the new one. The bad effect of this trend is making people depend on machines too much.
In conclusion, using machines to do work is good but we have to learn how to use it effectively and find the legit store to buy them.
Our world has
been developed
very
fast
and in the most modern way.
Because
of that, almost all factories and
companies
or farms around the world apply new technology
machines
instead
of human. These
machines
have
been applied
in processing of food, clothes, accessories, cultivation even the most difficult and complex things
effectively
. This is the best way to achieve the purposes in business,
but
it
also
has
many
disadvantages.
On one hand, using
machines
can
help
factories solve the manpower shortage issue
easily
. One of the most
important
benefits of this trend is the
big
profits it brings back.
For example
, we don't
have to
share too
much
profits to pay salary for workers and
machine
will do
some
work
faster than human
so
we can do more
work
in the same time.
Furthermore
,
because
a high technology
machine
can
work
fast
and exactly, we can
reduce
time-consuming too.
On the other hand
, the price of them is not
small
. We can say that they are expensive. Although,
today
it is the newest
but
after 2 or 3 year, it can be out of trend
easily
due to the
fast
development.
In addition
, if we
are tricked
, we will
get
the fake or low quality
machines
.
Sometimes
, these
machines
are out of warranty and broken down
so
we
have to
pay an amount of money to
get
the new one. The
bad
effect of this trend is making
people
depend on
machines
too much.
In conclusion
, using
machines
to do
work
is
good
but
we
have to
learn how to
use
it
effectively
and find the legit store to
buy
them.
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