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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car. v.1

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car. v. 1
The car has both Advantages and Disadvantages, but from my point of view it has more application. It is so important in our life, let's see which type of uses of jeep in life. If you travel from This automotive vehicle, then you can travel long distance without any difficulties. second are you can sit well. Where on the motorcycle after 1 or 2 hours continuously then you can feel the tiredness because of not properly sitting methods are available in the bike. Third are that if you want to go outside in the rainy season you can go without getting wet in the rain, Also there are many applications of automobile van. It also has Disadvantages but compare to Advantages we can say that van has more Advantages over Bike. If you see drawbacks of this, then first comes in our mind is pollution, but in my opinion, it has less pollution compare to bikes and any other Vehicles because if you want to go one destination to another and you have four people in your family and, if you have the facility of van then you can go with four people, but If you don't have it then you can go with two motorcycles, so that's why Bikes has more pollution. Nowadays buying an automobile vehicle is so easy because of 0 percentage EMI service, but If you compare rates of this application, then there are lots of rate included in the bills for, example cost of the vehicles then figure of accessories then insurance price tag, etc. In the final Analysis four wheels have more Advantages if you differentiate between car and bike you get more Advantages of car. If you see graphs of this year and illustrate the graph, then we can see that the difference between it.
The car has both
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from my point of view it has more application.

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in our life,
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which type of
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of jeep in life. If you travel from This automotive
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, then you can travel long distance without any difficulties.
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are you can sit well. Where on the motorcycle after 1 or 2 hours
continuously
then you can feel the tiredness
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. Third are that if you want to go outside in the rainy season you can go without getting wet in the rain,
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applications of automobile van.

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compare to
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we can say that van has more
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over
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Bike
. If you
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in our mind is pollution,
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in my opinion, it has less pollution compare to
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and any other
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Vehicles
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because
if you want to go one destination to another and you have four
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in your family and, if you have the facility of van then you can
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four
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two motorcycles,
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has more pollution.

Nowadays buying an automobile
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is
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so
easy
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because
of 0 percentage EMI service,
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but
If you compare rates of this application, then there are lots of rate included in the bills for, example cost of the
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vehicles
then figure of accessories then insurance price tag, etc.

In the final Analysis four wheels have more
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Advantages
if you differentiate between car and
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bike
you
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more
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of car. If you
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graphs of this year and illustrate the graph, then we can
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that the difference between it.
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IELTS essay Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
302 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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