It is no doubt that more and more new vehicle technology innovations have been come into being. However, a large numbers of road accidents are being happened day-to-day. In my opinion, there are many reason that causes these accident and some measures should be taken.
There are some main factors causing road accidents. The main cause is the narrow awareness of road users. Many people in traffic do not wear helmet and comply with traffic laws, which can lead to awful consequences. According to researchers, there are 35% accidents on the roadway being caused by bad behavior such as drinking alcohol or using mobile phone while they were driving. Secondly, the qualities of public transport construction are being downgraded. In fact, Vietnam’s government have not upgrade or expand railway system for over a century so many unfortunate railway accidents have happened. Last but not least, traffic laws are not strict enough to deter violators. The penalty clauses of the law are too gent to make people not repeat an offence.
To solve this problems, I will suggest some measures. First of all, government should raise the awareness of people by propagating on the mass media and at schools. In addition, government should open classes to help people know negative impacts of unsafe driving. Moreover, they also should enact finer laws to deter commuters from offending traffic laws. Finally, government have to plan for a traffic system with the farther view.
To sum up, road accidents result from several causes. Therefore, it is high time we needed take some measures to against these issues.
It is no doubt that more and more new vehicle technology innovations have been
come
into being.
However
, a large
numbers
of
road
accidents
are
being happened
day-to-day. In my opinion, there are
many reason
that causes these
accident
and
some
measures should
be taken
.
There are
some
main factors causing
road
accidents
. The main cause is the narrow awareness of
road
users.
Many
people
in
traffic
do not wear helmet and comply with
traffic
laws
, which can lead to awful consequences. According to researchers, there are 35%
accidents
on the roadway
being caused
by
bad
behavior such as drinking alcohol or using mobile phone while they were driving.
Secondly
, the qualities of public transport construction are
being downgraded
. In fact, Vietnam’s
government
have not upgrade or expand railway system for over a century
so
many
unfortunate railway
accidents
have happened. Last
but
not least,
traffic
laws
are not strict
enough
to deter violators. The penalty clauses of the
law
are too gent to
make
people
not repeat an
offence
.
To solve
this
problems, I will suggest
some
measures.
First of all
,
government
should raise the awareness of
people
by propagating on the mass media and at schools.
In addition
,
government
should open classes to
help
people
know
negative
impacts of unsafe driving.
Moreover
, they
also
should enact finer
laws
to deter commuters from offending
traffic
laws
.
Finally
,
government
have to
plan for a
traffic
system with the farther view.
To sum up,
road
accidents
result from several causes.
Therefore
, it is high time we needed take
some
measures to against these issues.
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