Describe your hometown· Describe the place· What is special about it? · Compare it to other cities in the world? v.1
Describe your hometown· Describe the place· What is special about it? · Compare it to other cities in the world? v. 1
Many forms of advertising are unanimous in today’s world. Marketing products according to some brings awareness, and hence it is welcomed, however, others claim that it is causing adverse effects on society. This essay will examine both views and supports advertising as it is essential to make decisions.
Those who believe that advertisements causes detrimental effects on the community argue so due to foremost factor being decision fatigue. Since, too many products are on ads for the same purpose, it causes strain on brain to choose one among the available options for each daily requirement. Also to add on, people end up shedding amount on unnecessary items looking at attractive commercials. Because of above two reasons, it appears that commercials are the sources of negativity in society.
Others, myself included, support ads as it makes lives comfortable and easy to make informed decisions. To explain in other words, in our busy daily chores, unconsciously we are exposed to advertisements in forms of hoarding boards, TV commercials, online ads etc. . , therefore, we are aware of goods available in market without looking for them intentionally. This enables anyone to purchase the right item for any purpose. For instance, if a person is suffering from hair fall, out of many shampoo brands available, one can take decision to select the correct product based on information available on commercials. Hence, due to such convenience in making decisions, I feel marketing should be welcomed.
In conclusion, in today’s world data is overloaded everywhere, but absence of data could be more catastrophic. Therefore, instead of treating too many ads as negativity, making smart choices with available information is required.
Many
forms of advertising are unanimous in
today
’s world. Marketing products according to
some
brings awareness, and
hence
it
is welcomed
,
however
, others claim that it is causing adverse effects on society. This essay will examine both views and supports advertising as it is essential to
make
decisions.
Those who believe that advertisements causes detrimental effects on the community argue
so
due to foremost factor being
decision
fatigue. Since, too
many
products are on ads for the same purpose, it causes strain on brain to choose one among the
available
options for each daily requirement.
Also
to
add
on,
people
end
up shedding amount on unnecessary items looking at attractive commercials.
Because
of above two reasons, it appears that commercials are the sources of negativity in society.
Others, myself included, support ads as it
makes
lives
comfortable and easy to
make
informed
decisions
. To
explain
in other words
, in our busy daily chores,
unconsciously
we
are exposed
to advertisements in forms of hoarding boards, TV commercials, online ads etc.
.
,
therefore
, we are aware of
goods
available
in market without looking for them
intentionally
. This enables anyone to
purchase
the right item for any purpose.
For instance
, if a person is suffering from hair fall, out of
many
shampoo brands
available
, one can take
decision
to select the correct product based on information
available
on commercials.
Hence
, due to such convenience in making
decisions
, I feel marketing should
be welcomed
.
In conclusion
, in
today
’s world data
is overloaded
everywhere,
but
absence of data could be more catastrophic.
Therefore
,
instead
of treating too
many
ads as negativity, making smart choices with
available
information
is required
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes