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Describe something you own which is very important to you. You should say: where you got it from how long you have had it what you use it for; and explain why it is important to you. You will have to talk about the topic for 1 to 2 minutes. You v.3

Describe something you own which is very important to you. You should say: where you got it from how long you have had it what you use it for; and explain why it is important to you. You will have to talk about the topic for 1 to 2 minutes. You v. 3
Distance learning and online certifications have become quite common nowadays. A few individuals, still chose to be physically present in the classroom for their learning sessions. In my opinion, online education is simply a better option for the growing number of students nationally and internationally. Furthermore, this option not only provides convenience but costs less. On the one hand, Online studies offer the students to simply login to an institute, from any part of the world. It removes all barriers for a student to learn from the comfort of his own home or office. Additionally, financially it places less burden on the student, by eliminating the travel cost, and saving time. For example, a recent research report published in May 2019 by the department of education in the USA, states that 90% of the adult learners prefer to select an online education over traditional methods, due to the simple fact, that distance education is cheaper and flexible in their schedule. On the other hand, Some people find it more convenient for them to learn in a classroom environment. A classroom provides a traditional method of teaching and learning that has been used for centuries, hence everyone is more familiar with it. A primary requirement of distance learning is knowing how to use a computer. Some people find it difficult to navigate a computer, and that is the reason for their preference of a classroom. I believe, Online courses and studies are a better option for everyone due to lower cost and accessibility. In conclusion, In the near future people will shift their mindset to online studies and courses, because it gives everyone the flexibility to learn and saves them time and money.
Distance
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learning
and
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online
certifications have become quite common nowadays. A few individuals,
still
chose to be
physically
present in the classroom for their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
sessions. In my opinion,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
is
simply
a better option for the growing number of
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students
nationally
and
internationally
.
Furthermore
, this option not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
provides convenience
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
costs less.

On the one hand,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Online
studies offer the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
to
simply
login to an institute, from any part of the world. It removes all barriers for a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
to learn from the comfort of his
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
home or office.
Additionally
,
financially
it places less burden on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
, by eliminating the travel cost, and saving time.
For example
, a recent research report published in May 2019 by the department of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
in the USA, states that 90% of the adult learners prefer to select an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
over traditional methods, due to the simple fact, that distance
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
is cheaper and flexible in their schedule.

On the other hand
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
find it more convenient for them to learn in a classroom environment. A classroom provides a traditional method of teaching and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
that has been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for centuries,
hence
everyone is more familiar with it. A primary requirement of distance
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
The verb 'knowing' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
is knowing
how to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
a computer.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
find it difficult to navigate a computer, and
that is
the reason for their preference of a classroom.

I believe,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Online
courses and studies are a better option for everyone due to lower cost and accessibility.

In conclusion
, In the near future
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
will shift their mindset to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
studies and courses,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it gives everyone the flexibility to learn and saves them time and money.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Describe something you own which is very important to you. You should say: where you got it from how long you have had it what you use it for; and explain why it is important to you. You will have to talk about the topic for 1 to 2 minutes. You v. 3

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
282 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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