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Describe an ideal marriage partner. What qualities do you think r most important for a husband or wife? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice. v.1

Describe an ideal marriage partner. What qualities do you think r most important for a husband or wife? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice. v. 1
Over the past century, humanity has spent billions of dollars on scientific research. In hospitals, universities, and military installations around the world, people have set up laboratories and use special equipment to capture, cultivate, and identify microorganisms. Therefore, it is imperative to know whether government or private organizations should be carried methodologies. In my perspective, administrative power should control scientific research due to heavy investment and public welfare. Indeed, a heavy structure is required for large-scale studies, which can easily be managed by local authorities. Tax collection from citizens inflows huge income into the bureaucrat departments every year, whereby installation work has done smoothly. Also, the experiment continues many years that probably makes difficult for commercial organizations to conduct research operation for some decades. According to a report of the New York Times, 90% research has operated only by governments owing to the big investment requirements. Thus, it is pertinent an experiment has funded by the house of Senates. Furthermore, scientific research should be the people-driven, not the monetary driven. Mostly private-owned organization's scientific projects are associated with profits instead of society's welfare. Arguably, local bodies do work for humanity so that every person can get benefited by the advancement. In India, all residents are saved from polio-virus, just because this project is handed over by the center-government, thereby all dwellers get the polio vaccine free of charge. Hence, control of local authorities over research methodologies has more benefits for masses than commercials' research. In conclusion, scientific experiment plays a vital role in the nation's growth. Although it is hard for private owners to generate funds and conduct scientific analysis without having a personal motive, I believe that the government's scientific studies always in the interest of public.
Over the past century, humanity has spent billions of dollars on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
scientific
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
. In hospitals, universities, and military installations around the world,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
have set up laboratories and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
special equipment to capture, cultivate, and identify microorganisms.
Therefore
, it is imperative to know whether
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
or private organizations should
be carried
methodologies. In my perspective, administrative power should control
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
scientific
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
due to heavy investment and public welfare.

Indeed
, a heavy structure
is required
for large-scale studies, which can
easily
be managed
by local authorities. Tax collection from citizens inflows huge income into the bureaucrat departments every year, whereby installation work has done
smoothly
.
Also
, the experiment continues
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many
years that
probably
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
difficult for commercial organizations to conduct
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research
operation for
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some
decades. According to a report of the New York Times, 90%
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research
has operated
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only
by
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governments
owing to the
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big
investment requirements.
Thus
, it is pertinent an experiment has funded by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
of Senates.

Furthermore
,
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scientific
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
should be the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
-driven, not the monetary driven.
Mostly
private-
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owned
organization's
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scientific
projects
are associated
with profits
instead
of society's welfare.
Arguably
, local bodies do work for humanity
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so
that every person can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
benefited by the advancement. In India, all residents
are saved
from polio-virus,
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just
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
this project
is handed
over by the center-
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
, thereby all dwellers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the polio vaccine free of charge.
Hence
, control of local authorities over
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
methodologies has more benefits for masses than commercials' research.

In conclusion
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
scientific
experiment plays a vital role in the nation's growth. Although it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
for private owners to generate funds and conduct
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
scientific
analysis without having a personal motive, I believe that the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
scientific
studies always in the interest of public.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Describe an ideal marriage partner. What qualities do you think r most important for a husband or wife? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
288 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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