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Describe a time when you were ask to give your opinion in a questionnaire or survey. You should say: What the questionnaire / survey was about? Why you were asked to give your opinions? What opinions you gave? and explain how you felt about giving yo v.1

Describe a time when you were ask to give your opinion in a questionnaire or survey. You should say: What the questionnaire / survey was about? Why you were asked to give your opinions? What opinions you gave? and explain how you felt about giving yo v. 1
Although it is thought by some that movies can now be conveniently watched on mobile gadgets, while others believe that in order to enjoy a movie it has to be seen in a theatre. In my opinion, I believe watching a movie in the cinema is better because it provides one with a great viewing and sound quality. On the one hand, people that believe this view think that watching films on phones is cheaper and more flexible. To put in another way, subscribing for films via tablets and smartphones gives an individual the opportunity to watch the movie at any time he desires, and even any place he deems fit unlike in the cinema where movies are shown on a schedule which might not be convenient. Furthermore, viewing movies on phones is also more affordable as one will not need to spend any money on transport fare or even planning clothes to wear. A good example of a very convenient plan is Netflix an online movie store which provides movies across all genres to viewers at a very affordable price and these movies can be viewed on different devices at any given time. On the other hand, supporters of this view think that in order to enjoy a movie one needs to go to the cinema and I agree because these movies are of better sound and picture quality. That is, the movie hall provides films at a very high resolution and excellent sound and this increases viewers viewing pleasure. For instance, after a survey carried out by National Film Festival in Nigeria, 70% of the participants said that they would rather go see a movie at the cinema because of its quality picture and perfect sound. These characteristics are presently unavailable in movies downloaded via phones. To conclude, while people may vary in their opinions, I believe that it is highly more enjoyable to visit the cinema for the purpose of seeing a movie because of the unmatched picture and excellent sound.
Although it is
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thought
by
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some
that
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movies
can
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now
be
conveniently
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watched
on mobile gadgets, while others
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believe
that in order to enjoy a
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movie
it
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has to
be
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seen
in a
Possible spelling mistake. 'theatre' is British English.
theatre
. In my opinion, I
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believe
watching a
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movie
in the
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cinema
is better
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because
it provides one with a great viewing and
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sound
quality.

On the one hand,
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people
that
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believe
this view
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that watching films on phones is cheaper and more flexible. To put in another way, subscribing for films via tablets and smartphones gives an individual the opportunity to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
at any time he desires, and even any place he deems fit unlike in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cinema
where
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movies
are shown
on a schedule which might not be convenient.
Furthermore
, viewing
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movies
on phones is
also
more affordable as one will not need to spend any money on transport fare or even planning clothes to wear. A
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good
example of a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
convenient plan is Netflix an online
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movie
store which provides
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movies
across all genres to viewers at a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
affordable price and these
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movies
can
be viewed
on
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different
devices at any
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given
time.

On the other hand
, supporters of this view
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think
that in order to enjoy a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
one needs to go to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cinema
and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
these
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movies
are of better
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sound
and picture quality.
That is
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
hall provides films at a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
high resolution and excellent
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sound
and this increases viewers viewing pleasure.
For instance
, after a survey carried out by National Film Festival in Nigeria, 70% of the participants said that they would
rather
go
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
at the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cinema
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of its quality picture and perfect
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sound
. These characteristics are
presently
unavailable in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movies
downloaded via phones.

To conclude
, while
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
may vary in their opinions, I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
believe
that it is
highly
more enjoyable to visit the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cinema
for the purpose of seeing a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the unmatched picture and excellent
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sound
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay Describe a time when you were ask to give your opinion in a questionnaire or survey. You should say: What the questionnaire / survey was about? Why you were asked to give your opinions? What opinions you gave? and explain how you felt about giving yo v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
334 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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