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Describe a nice conversation that you had with someone you know. Please say- Who was that person? - Where was it? - What were you talking about? v.1

Describe a nice conversation that you had with someone you know. Please say- Who was that person? - Where was it? - What were you talking about? v. 1
Myth has been developed in the market that the only possible way to grow in trading one should have an uncommon item. This essay disagrees that the rare outcomes are the only way of succeeding in a particular field. Firstly, this essay will discuss that an item should be based on modern demand and secondly, it will discuss that the material should be cheaper. To get the attention of the users, it's been necessary that the produced outcome should be based on the latest trend and technologies. As we are living in the modern era and everyone wants a material with the latest technology with a new operating system due to which, it would be easier for a newly produced thing to get hike in the business sector. Also, it has become necessary for everyone to move ahead with the new technology due to which, they prefer smart techniques in any merchandise rather than it's rareness. For example, Nokia, a one of the best producers of mobile phones got closed due to their mindset of having the same and old technology over the years. Hence, a good should stand on the new trend in demand. Also, to achieve the success in less time a object should not be too costly. As the inflation is getting increase rapidly due to which, the local people love to buy a new good having less amount, because a large number of sales depends on the middle class families. Nobody uses a product for so long because their main aim is to utilise a material for a shorter time period and throw it away. The REDMI mobile company is the primary example, because they launched a smartphone with same features as the IPHONE, however, the only difference was the price range, because Redmi smartphone was stated in the price range of Rs. 10, 000 whereas, the IPHONE cost Rs. 40, 000 however, still the REDMI became one of the most selling mobile company in the Asia. Hence, to touch the peak of any business field product should be less expensive and affordable. To conclude, to mark their presence in the field a product should be trend based and less in price to get more attention and popularity.
Myth has
been developed
in the market that the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
possible way to grow in trading one should have an uncommon item. This essay disagrees that the rare outcomes are the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
way of succeeding in a particular field.
Firstly
, this essay will discuss that an item should
be based
on modern demand and
secondly
, it will discuss that the material should be cheaper.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the attention of the users, it's been necessary that the produced outcome should
be based
on the latest trend and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
technologies
. As we are living in the modern era and everyone wants a material with the latest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
technology
with a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
operating system
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
due
to which, it would be easier for a
newly
produced thing to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
hike in the business sector.
Also
, it has become necessary for everyone to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
ahead with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
technology
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
due
to which, they prefer smart techniques in any merchandise
rather
than it's rareness.
For example
, Nokia, a one of the best producers of mobile phones
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
closed
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due
to their mindset of having the same and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
technology
over the years.
Hence
, a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
should stand on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
trend in demand.

Also
, to achieve the success in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
less
time
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
object should not be too costly. As the inflation is getting increase
rapidly
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
due
to which, the local
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
a
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new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
having
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
less
amount,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use "many" or "numerous"
a large number of
sales depends
The usual prepositions to use when surrounded is "in" not "on". Did you mean "in the middle"?
on the middle
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class
families. Nobody
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uses
a product for
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so
long
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
their main aim is to
Possible spelling mistake. 'utilise' is British English.
utilise
a material for a shorter time period and throw it away. The
Possible spelling mistake found.
REDMI
mobile
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
is the primary example,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they launched a smartphone with same features as the
Possible spelling mistake found.
IPHONE
,
however
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
difference was the price range,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
Possible spelling mistake found.
Redmi
smartphone
was stated
in the price range of Rs. 10, 000 whereas, the
Possible spelling mistake found.
IPHONE
cost Rs. 40, 000
however
,
still
the
Possible spelling mistake found.
REDMI
became one of the most selling mobile
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
in the Asia.
Hence
, to touch the peak of any business field product should be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
less
expensive and affordable.

To conclude
, to mark their presence in the field a product should be
Did you mean "trended"?
trend
based and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
less
in price to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
more attention and popularity.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay Describe a nice conversation that you had with someone you know. Please say- Who was that person? - Where was it? - What were you talking about? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
372 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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