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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement If we can t say anything nice about someone then we should not say anything about this person v.2

If we can t say anything nice about someone then we should not say anything about this person v. 2
There are many different conditions in our lives when we need to talk about something or someone but there is no possitive point about that thing or person. We are going to focus on the situation when we want to talk about the behavior of individuals. Now, we have two choices; the first thing we can do is to be quite and say nothing, on the other hand, we can say what we know about him no matter is the consequence. While some people prefer to do the first method, personally, I perefer the second way because of two reasons which are about helping others to know that person better and illuminate that person’s own viewpoint about himself. The first situation that comes to my mind immediately pondering this issue is when someone asks you about other person and expects you to help him because it will have great influences on his life. For instance, imagine a guy who wants to marry with your co-worker. working with her for several years, you are totally aware about her behavior. In my opinion, Therefore, we have to conduct that person because marrage is the one of the most important decisions in each person’s life, it can culminates the life or ruins it. To shed more light on it, when I wanted to marry with my first wife, I went to her office and asked one of employees about her. After talking about her well-manner personality, he suggested me to hold my wedding as soon as possible. So I believe in him and proposed my ex-wife and she said yes. Although she seemed nice while we were in the relationship, being under same roof changed my perspective about her. Not only was she untidy, but also she was selfish, both of behaviors that I hate. That marrage had longed only for about a year and devorce was its consequence. If that person told me about her manner correctly, it would not happen in my life. Secondly, as a friend we must talk about our fellows bad manner with them, and help them to improve their characterestic. While some people become angry about hearing unpleasunt things about themselves, the smart individuals welcome these views because it helps them to understand their advantage and disadvantage points. In the other words, it is better to hear this comments from a friend instead of a stranger. To illustrate it, when I was at highschool, I had a friend, Hooman. having frank personality, he could not find many friends. Nevertheless, I liked him because he analyse my actions and told me which one was good and which one has to be changed. Our friendship has helped me to be a better person in society, who has less negtive points and more possitive ones. As a human everybody thinks he has the best characterestic, but it will be changed if somebody monitor others behavior impartialy. In my opinion, having a friend who pays attention to your behavior and notices your neggative and possitive points is a remarkable asset. To make the long story short, according to the aforementioned arguments it is not essensial to talk nice about a person because some times talking about his less-developed parts of behavior can help both others and that person. Helping others in their choices related to that person and helping the person in order to make better version of himself.
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about something or someone
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possitive
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point
about that thing or
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person
. We are going to focus on the situation when we want to
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talk
about the
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behavior
of individuals.
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, we have two choices; the
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thing we can do is to be quite and say nothing, on the
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other
hand, we can say what we know about him no matter is the consequence. While
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some
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people
prefer to do the
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method,
personally
, I
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perefer
the second way
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of two reasons which are about helping others to know that
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person
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better
and illuminate that
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person’s
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own
viewpoint about himself.

The
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first
situation that
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comes
to my mind immediately pondering this issue is when someone asks you about
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other
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person
and
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expects
you to
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help
him
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because
it will have great influences on his life.
For instance
, imagine a guy who wants to marry with your co-worker.
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working
with her for several years, you are
totally
aware about her
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behavior
. In my opinion,
Therefore
, we
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have to
conduct that
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person
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because
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marrage
is the one of the most
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important
decisions in each
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person’s
life, it can
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culminates
the life or ruins it. To shed more light on it, when I wanted to marry with my
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first
wife, I went to her office and asked one of employees about her. After talking about her well-manner personality, he suggested me to hold my wedding as
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soon
as possible.
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So
I believe in him and proposed my
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ex-wife and
she said yes. Although she seemed nice while we were in the relationship, being under same roof
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changed
my perspective about her. Not
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only
was she untidy,
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but
also
she was selfish, both of
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behaviors
that I hate. That
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marrage
had longed
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only
for about a year and
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devorce
was its consequence. If that
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person
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told
me about her manner
correctly
, it would not happen in my life.

Secondly
, as a
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friend
we
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must
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talk
about our fellows
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bad
manner with them, and
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help
them to
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improve
their
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characterestic
. While
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some
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people
become angry about hearing
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unpleasunt
things about themselves, the smart individuals welcome these views
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because
it
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helps
them to understand their advantage and disadvantage
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points
. In the
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other
words, it is
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better
to hear this comments from a
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friend
instead
of a stranger. To illustrate it, when I was at
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highschool
, I had a
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friend
,
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Hooman
.
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having
frank personality, he could not find
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many
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friends
.
Nevertheless
, I liked him
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because
he
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analyse
my actions and
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told
me which one was
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good
and which one
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has to
be
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changed
. Our friendship has
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helped
me to be a
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better
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person
in society, who has less
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negtive
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points
and more
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ones. As a human everybody
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thinks
he has the best
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characterestic
,
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but
it will be
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changed
if somebody
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monitor
others
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behavior
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impartialy
. In my opinion, having a
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friend
who pays attention to your
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behavior
and notices your
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neggative
and
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possitive
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points
is a remarkable asset.

To
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make
the long story short, according to the aforementioned arguments it is not
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essensial
to
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talk
nice about a
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person
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because
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some
times talking about his less-developed parts of
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behavior
can
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help
both others and that
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person
. Helping others in their choices related to that
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person
and helping the
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person
in order to
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make
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better
version of himself.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
46Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23Mistakes
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IELTS essay If we can t say anything nice about someone then we should not say anything about this person v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
568 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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