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Describe a newspaper or magazine you enjoy reading. You should say: •What kind of newspaper / magazine it is•Which parts of it you read regularly•When and where you read it•Explain why you enjoy reading it v.2

Describe a newspaper or magazine you enjoy reading. You should say: •What kind of newspaper / magazine it is•Which parts of it you read regularly•When and where you read it•Explain why you enjoy reading it v. 2
Opinions differ from how the state budget is allocated on a country’s transportation. Some argue that government should build new facilities for high-speed intercity trains, while others think improving existing public transport is more needed. The essay below will discuss both views and state personal opinion at the end. People support the idea of investing in rapid trains because they deliver many benefits. The greatest advantage of this kind of vehicle is that it is fast and not subject to congestion. Trains can operate on schedule every day without delay, especially during rush hours and peak time travel, which saves time and allows people to commute more frequently. Additionally, high-speed intercity trains offer an alternative travel choice to air, automobile and bus travel. With competitive price compared to planes, trains would suit a large number of passengers, especially the middle-class and the non-affluent who are not able to afford a plane ticket. Thanks to the reduced travel time and cost, not only do fast trains make travel between cities easier, but they also bring more convenience and comfortability to people than in comparison with slow trains or long-hour buses. Opponents say that already-existing public transport needs improving since day-to-day transport is a more immediate problem. To illustrate, in Vietnam, it is not uncommon to see old buses with the degraded condition releasing toxic smoke going around cities. They are also timely- unreliable, which discourages people to use this kind of transport. If these situations have been improved, apparently more people are willing to use buses to go around. They can even stop using their private vehicles, thus contributing to the reduction of congestions and improvement of air quality. Therefore, it is advised for the government to tackle these issues before embarking on any large-scale nationwide project. In conclusion, that is not to say that fast trains are not significant for people. However, it is better for the authorities to focus on the existing public transport system to ensure people are content with that before starting new projects.
Opinions differ from how the state budget
is allocated
on a country’s transportation.
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Some
argue that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should build new facilities for high-speed intercity
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trains
, while others
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
improving existing public
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transport
is more needed. The essay below will discuss both views and state personal opinion at the
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end
.

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People
support the
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idea
of investing in rapid
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trains
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because
they deliver
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many
benefits. The greatest advantage of this kind of vehicle is that it is
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fast
and not subject to congestion.
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Trains
can operate on schedule every day without delay,
especially
during rush hours and peak time
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travel
, which saves time and
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allows
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people
to commute more
frequently
.
Additionally
, high-speed intercity
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trains
offer an alternative
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travel
choice to air, automobile and bus
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travel
. With competitive price compared to
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planes
,
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trains
would suit
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a large number of
passengers,
especially
the middle-
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class
and the non-affluent who are not able to afford a
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plane
ticket. Thanks to the
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reduced
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travel
time and cost, not
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only
do
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fast
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trains
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make
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travel
between cities easier,
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but
they
also
bring more convenience and
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comfortability
to
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people
than
in comparison
with slow
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trains
or long-hour buses.

Opponents say that already-existing public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transport
needs improving since day-to-day
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transport
is a more immediate problem. To illustrate, in Vietnam, it is not uncommon to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
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old
buses with the degraded condition releasing toxic smoke going around cities. They are
also
timely- unreliable, which discourages
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people
to
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use
this kind of
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transport
. If these situations have been
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improved
,
apparently
more
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people
are willing to
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use
buses to go around. They can even
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
using their private vehicles,
thus
contributing to the reduction of congestions and improvement of air quality.
Therefore
, it
is advised
for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
to tackle these issues
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before
embarking on any large-scale nationwide project.

In conclusion
,
that is
not to say that
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fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trains
are not significant for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
.
However
, it is better for the authorities to focus on the existing public
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transport
system to ensure
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are content with that
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before
starting new projects.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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He who knows no foreign languages knows nothing of his own.
Johann Wolfgang von Goethe

IELTS essay Describe a newspaper or magazine you enjoy reading. You should say: •What kind of newspaper / magazine it is•Which parts of it you read regularly•When and where you read it•Explain why you enjoy reading it v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
337 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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