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Describe a movies is good? Are you agree or disagree v.1

Describe a movies is good? Are you agree or disagree v. 1
It is a fact that various types of movies are produced by filmmakers. While some films are making entertainment, other are produced to romantic movies. Many people are watching the comedy movie. Firstly, various genres of films produce these days, and each of them is different stories or purposes. However, like to watch comedy movie, Hollywood movies south Indian movies also and many more. Many producers are creating drama, comedy films such as Hera Pheri, Chup Chup Ke and making many more. The cartoon movies are also created like kung fu panda, minions. Furthermore, some film directors are creating real stories films. These films are designed to make their audience think. Moreover the Hollywood producers are created, new technological movies like terminators. It is more benefits of people's, the horror movies and war movies. Some examples of these conjuring, iron man. That's movies is creating a new idea of some students and younger Director's are also like to some adventure films, for example, pirates of the Caribbean and his actor Johny deaf also amazing actor. In conclusion, it is true that each movie is produced for different purposes. Some movies are produced for pure action or entertainment, while others are made for a special concept. I personally prefer technological films or real story, since there are many things that you can get and learn from watching these films.
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movies
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produced
by filmmakers. While
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some
films are making entertainment, other are
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produced
to romantic
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movies
.
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people
are watching the comedy movie.

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, various genres of films produce these days, and each of them is
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different
stories or purposes.
However
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watch
comedy
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movie
, Hollywood
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movies
south Indian
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movies
also
and
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many
more.
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Many
producers are creating drama, comedy films such as Hera
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,
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Chup Chup
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Ke
and making
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more. The cartoon
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are
also
created like
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kung
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fu
panda, minions.

Furthermore
,
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film directors are creating real stories films. These films
are designed
to
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make
their audience
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think
.
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Moreover
the Hollywood producers
are created
, new technological
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movies
like terminators. It is more benefits of
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people
's, the horror
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movies
and war
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movies
.
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Some
examples of these conjuring, iron
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man
. That's
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movies
is creating a new
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idea
of
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some
students and younger
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are
also
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adventure films,
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,
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pirates of the Caribbean
and his actor
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Johny
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also
amazing actor.

In conclusion
, it is true that each
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movie
is
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produced
for
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different
purposes.
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Some
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movies
are
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produced
for pure action or entertainment, while others
are made
for a special concept. I
personally
prefer technological films or real story, since there are
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many
things that you can
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get
and learn from watching these films.
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16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS essay Describe a movies is good? Are you agree or disagree v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
228 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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