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Describe your favorite dish you should say; where did you taste it; how frequently do you eat it; what type of dish is it. v.1

Describe your favorite dish you should say; where did you taste it; how frequently do you eat it; what type of dish is it. v. 1
Art is a fundamental part of society and should be funded as it enriches lives through charm and thought provoking ideas. Art presents ideas and objects in new and interesting ways that allow people to think more deeply about the world and appreciate artistry. I completely agree that the authorities should invest capital in the creative arts. In this essay, the value of funding the arts will be discussed with relevant examples. Many pieces of art are derided as being worthless or inaccessible as they include ordinary objects taken out of their normal context or objects that have no obvious meaning. People will question the artists' motives and whether the piece is useful, valuable or beautiful. In more accessible forms of art such as music, literature and painting a story is told and allows us to build empathy with people in different situations and can expose prejudice and injustice. To cite an example, giving importance to the arts will motivate and encourage students to pursue their mainstream education in arts and creative domains like film making, music ant photography. Supporting the arts therefore improves our thinking and ultimately our society. A further value of art is that it brings beauty to public spaces. In many cities around the world, people can be seen having their photographs taken with sculptures or architecture. Public art, which is almost always government funded, makes cities more interesting and is appreciated by both locals and tourists. For example, cities including Cannes and Paris are the famous for their arts festivals and draw in enormous numbers of tourists. Art attracts people to cities and has economic value. People also visit many cities for their permanent art collections. In summary, artistry provides a source of beauty and provokes thought and is worthy of funding, particularly as it usually does not represent a significant.
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Art
is a fundamental part of society and should
be funded
as it enriches
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lives
through charm and
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thought provoking
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ideas
.
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Art
presents
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ideas
and objects in new and interesting ways that
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allow
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people
to
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think
more
deeply
about the world and appreciate artistry. I completely
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agree
that the authorities should invest capital in the creative
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arts
. In this essay, the value of funding the
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arts
will
be discussed
with relevant examples.

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Many
pieces of
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art
are derided
as being worthless or inaccessible as they include ordinary objects taken out of their normal context or objects that have no obvious meaning.
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People
will question the artists' motives and whether the piece is useful, valuable or
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beautiful
. In more accessible forms of
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art
such as music, literature and painting a story is
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told
and
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allows
us to build empathy with
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people
in
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different
situations and can expose prejudice and injustice. To cite an example, giving importance to the
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arts
will motivate and encourage students to pursue their mainstream education in
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arts
and creative domains like film making, music ant photography. Supporting the
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arts
therefore
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improves
our thinking and
ultimately
our society.

A
further
value of
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art
is that it brings beauty to public spaces. In
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many
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cities
around the world,
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people
can be
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seen
having their photographs taken with sculptures or architecture. Public
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art
, which is almost always
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government
funded,
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makes
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cities
more interesting and
is appreciated
by both locals and tourists.
For example
,
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cities
including Cannes and Paris are the
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famous
for their
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arts
festivals and draw in enormous numbers of tourists.
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Art
attracts
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people
to
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cities
and has economic value.
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People
also
visit
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many
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cities
for their permanent
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art
collections.

In summary, artistry provides a source of beauty and provokes
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thought
and is worthy of funding,
particularly
as it
usually
does not represent
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a significant
.
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IELTS essay Describe your favorite dish you should say; where did you taste it; how frequently do you eat it; what type of dish is it. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
306 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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