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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement? v.12

Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. v. 12
Since pre-history, alternative medicines have used widely to cure people. Even nowadays, alternative medicines are used by many people around the world. However, some people claimed that, the use of such medicine should be limited due to the lack of scientific evidences for its effectiveness and dangers. Therefore, the optimum level for this issue can be solved by use both as complementary. Despite the long history of its use, the knowledge of alternative medicine is limited. There are many parts unknown and that could cause side effects even though there are no artificial substances. Since the alternative medicine' s effectiveness has not discovered, including whether this medicine can cure all the diseases, it cannot be able to use in all practices. Therefore, the natural medicine cannot be cured fully of all diseases and this only can be used as an additional substance rather than to cure diseases. However, natural medicines can have several advantages. First and foremost, alternative medicines usually can perform with diverse methods such as massages, therapy and aroma. All those methods of using alternative medicines usually do not have harmful to health. The most advantageous part for such aromatherapy and homeopathy of natural medicine, is the cheaper cost than modern medicines and which can be acquired from every pharmaceutical stores. The natural medicines can be used for daily lives, while modern medicine can be used for any emergencies. In conclusion, the natural medicine could be acquired easily by most of people without paying expensive prices. The optimum method would be the complementary of both medicines. The natural medicines would not worry about its effect, whereas the modern medicine would save its cost.
Since
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pre-history
,
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alternative
medicines have
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used
widely
to cure
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people
. Even nowadays,
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alternative
medicines are
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used
by
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many
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people
around the world.
However
,
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some
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people
claimed that, the
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use
of such
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medicine
should
be limited
due to the lack of scientific evidences for its effectiveness and
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dangers
.
Therefore
, the optimum level for this issue can
be solved
by
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use
both as complementary.

Despite the long history of its
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use
, the knowledge of
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alternative
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medicine
is limited
. There are
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many
parts unknown and that could cause side effects
even though
there are no artificial substances. Since the
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alternative
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medicine&
#039; s effectiveness has not discovered, including whether this
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medicine
can cure all the diseases, it cannot be able to
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use
in all practices.
Therefore
, the
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natural
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medicine
cannot
be cured
fully
of all diseases and this
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only
can be
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used
as an additional substance
rather
than to cure diseases.

However
,
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natural
medicines can have several advantages.
First
and foremost,
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alternative
medicines
usually
can perform with diverse methods such as massages, therapy and aroma. All those methods of using
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
alternative
medicines
usually
do not have harmful to health. The most advantageous part for such aromatherapy and homeopathy of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
natural
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medicine
, is the cheaper cost than modern medicines and which can
be acquired
from every pharmaceutical stores. The
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natural
medicines can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for daily
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
, while modern
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medicine
can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for any emergencies.

In conclusion
, the
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natural
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
medicine
could
be acquired
easily
by most of
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people
without paying expensive prices. The optimum method would be
The phrase 'the complementary of' is not correct. Use a noun, not an adjective, between 'the' and 'of'.
the complementary of
both medicines. The
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natural
medicines would not worry about its effect, whereas the modern
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
medicine
would save its cost.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
25Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. v. 12

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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