It is often argued that countries with lengthened working hours are more economically progressive than countries with a shorter period. I completely agree with this opinion and think that nations with limited work hours are less accomplished and more predisposed to various ill vices
First of all, I believe that a long work time enhances profit and thus growth of industries. Working for a longer period of time means that more task will be completed and companys' goals and objectives would be met within a shorter time frame which is tantamount to financial growth and therefore economic developments. For Instance, a recent research revealed over 20% surge in the GDP of a country where the federal government had extended the working period of its workers.
Secondly, this means that less attention is paid to social vices such as stealing, cultism, drug abuse, sexual abuse. Having a lot of work to do will definitely leave no time for unhealthy behaviours that are against the morality of the society therefore, a drastic decrease in the social menace inherent in a country. As reported recently, a certain community was able to cut down the menace of stealing when it engaged the youth in a community development program and extended its activities further.
In conclusion, Nations with longer working hours are wealthier and promising than countries with shorter hours because of the extra income earned as well as a reduction in social vices. It is therefore recommended that countries embrace this method of working for a richer and safer environment.
It is
often
argued that
countries
with lengthened
working
hours
are more
economically
progressive than
countries
with a shorter period. I completely
agree
with this opinion and
think
that nations with limited work
hours
are less accomplished and more predisposed to various ill
vices
First of all
, I believe that a long work
time
enhances profit and
thus
growth of industries.
Working
for a longer period of
time
means that more task will
be completed
and
companys
' goals and objectives would
be met
within a shorter
time
frame which is tantamount to financial growth and
therefore
economic developments.
For Instance
, a recent research revealed over 20% surge in the GDP of a
country
where the federal
government
had extended the
working
period of its workers.
Secondly
, this means that less attention
is paid
to social vices such as stealing, cultism, drug abuse, sexual abuse. Having
a lot of
work to do will definitely
leave
no
time
for unhealthy
behaviours
that are against the morality of the society
therefore
, a drastic decrease in the social menace inherent in a
country
. As reported recently, a certain community was able to
cut
down the menace of stealing when it engaged the youth in a community development program and extended its activities
further
.
In conclusion
, Nations with longer
working
hours
are wealthier and promising than
countries
with shorter
hours
because
of the extra income earned
as well
as a reduction in social vices. It is
therefore
recommended that
countries
embrace this method of
working
for a richer and safer environment.
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