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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree? v.18

Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. v. 18
Many people believe that selection of clothes reveals the culture and personality of an individual to a huge extent. Clothes are the representation of a person's character and relation to the environment. I strongly agree with this topic and this essay will discuss any relevant agreements with examples. First of all, it is the reality that clothes choice depends on the ones belonging and attachment. I mean to say that if a person following some religion, then one must wear according to that attachment. For example, people from different countries wear different clothes according to their country tradition. As a result, it depicts the belonging to a unique characteristic. Secondly, clothes also illustrate the class of a person in term of money. To be more precise, rich people used to wear costly, stylish and branded clothes. For instance, an employee of in a local company cannot buy classy clothes due their high prices. So, clothes are the mirror of the person's class. However, it is not always true because sometimes people tend to imitate another. Moreover, individuals try to follow their favourite actor or actress. The peoples want to look like their favourit star. This is how, peoples are not expressing their own character. In conclusion, it is true that individual personality has a great influence on their choice. I agree that clothing really contribute to the mindset of a person. It is recommended that people tend to improve their personality according to their own thinking, not to copy others.
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people
believe that selection of
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clothes
reveals the culture and personality of an individual to a huge extent.
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Clothes
are the representation of a person's character and relation to the environment. I
strongly
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agree
with this topic and this essay will discuss any relevant agreements with examples.

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First of all
, it is the reality that
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clothes
choice depends on the ones belonging and attachment. I mean to say that if a person following
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some
religion, then one
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must
wear according to that attachment.
For example
,
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people
from
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different
countries wear
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different
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clothes
according to their country tradition.
As a result
, it depicts the belonging to a unique characteristic.

Secondly
,
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clothes
also
illustrate the
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class
of a person in term of money. To be more precise, rich
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people
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used
to wear costly, stylish and branded
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clothes
.
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, an employee of in a local
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company
cannot
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buy
classy
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clothes
due their high prices.
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So
,
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clothes
are the mirror of the person's
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class
.

However
, it is not always true
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because
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sometimes
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people
tend to imitate another.
Moreover
, individuals try to follow their
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favourite
actor or actress. The
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peoples
want to look like their
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favourit
star. This is how,
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peoples
are not expressing their
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own
character.

In conclusion
, it is true that individual personality has a great influence on their choice. I
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agree
that clothing
really
contribute to the mindset of a person. It
is recommended
that
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people
tend to
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improve
their personality according to their
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own
thinking, not to copy others.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. v. 18

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
250 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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