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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.20

Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. with this statement? v. 20
It is irrefutable that innovations have changed the world in the past few decades. Among all the innovations computers are often considered the biggest among all of them in the last century. I tend to agree with this statement and in this essay, I will present my view with examples. The most significant advantage of the computer is the speed. It is considered as the human calculator, because of the precision with which it can mitigate numerous problems. For example, CPU, the processor of the computer can do multitasking with an ease. In contrast, the calculator can process just a single calculation. As a result, for the 20 years, computers have taken over most of the gadgets and continually improved its versions. Another Compelling reason to support my view is the variety. The Computer does provide the freedom to use the same device for multiple things. For Instance, the same workstation can be used for a lot of household stuff, such as, studies, accounting and gaming. Computer along with the internet has become a lethal device and is helping people around the globe. It is all because of the wide variety of things people of all ages can use it for. In conclusion, all inventions have changed the world in one way or the other. In my opinion, the computer has changed the world in more ways than the other in the past century. It has also helped people become more knowledgeable and created a lot of opportunities for everyone around the globe.
It is irrefutable that innovations have
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changed
the world in the past few decades. Among all the innovations computers are
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often
considered the biggest among all of them in the last century. I tend to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with this statement and in this essay, I will present my view with examples.

The most significant advantage of the computer is the speed. It
is considered
as the human calculator,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the precision with which it can mitigate numerous problems.
For example
, CPU, the processor of the computer can do multitasking with an
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ease
.
In contrast
, the calculator can process
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
a single calculation.
As a result
, for the 20 years, computers have taken over most of the gadgets and
continually
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improved
its versions.

Another Compelling reason to support my view is the variety. The Computer does provide the freedom to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the same device for multiple things.
For Instance
, the same workstation can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
household stuff, such as, studies, accounting and gaming. Computer along with the internet has become a lethal device and is helping
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people
around the globe. It is all
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because
of the wide variety of things
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people
of all ages can
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use
it for.

In conclusion
, all inventions have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
the world in one way or the other. In my opinion, the computer has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
the world in more ways than the other in the past century. It has
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
become more knowledgeable and created
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
opportunities for everyone around the globe.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. with this statement? v. 20

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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