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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. v.2

Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. v. 2
These days, various types of media are used to communicate different information to the public such as books, film, theatre and many others. The following essay will discuss the positive and negative sides of television, radio and comic books as media of communicating information in details followed by a rational conclusion and my opinion about the most effective medium. Many people like television because they can both hear the information and see in visual which is a great way to convey messages to the mass people. Almost all television channels have their own news programs and should there be a special event in the country, most of the people would watch the show and that makes TV as effective tools to deliver different messages to the people. For example, the Royal Wedding in the UK is watched by millions of people around the world, as they would not only hear the news but they also want to see the bride and the maid and the whole festival. However, television has its own weakness as it is not mobile and thus often fail to reach people. They are not easy to carry, therefore people could watch television in certain places only. Some people like the radio because of its mobility and way of delivering messages to people. Although a lot of people consider it as old fashioned, several people still prefer listening to the radio for obtaining useful information. A lot of people are following the radio while they are driving as they could get information about the traffic condition or the weather forecast. However, the drawback is that people who have problems with their hearing capability will have trouble in getting some information from the radio. Although several people think that comics are mostly for children, but many adults still like reading comics. As comic conveys messages in the form of stories and it attracts children and teenagers, therefore it is an effective tool for delivering important messages to children and teens. Despite the positive side, a comic book has its own drawbacks, as the cost of producing comics is high and not all people like to read it. In my opinion, the most effective media for communicating information would be the radio. Even though it has some limitations, radio is still the most beneficial tool because of its mobility. These days, radios are produced in smaller sizes, such as the pocket radio, which can be carried everywhere.
These days, various types of media are
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information
to the public such as books, film,
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theatre
and
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others. The following essay will discuss the
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positive
and
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negative
sides of
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television
,
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radio
and
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comic
books as media of communicating
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information
in
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details
followed by a rational conclusion and my opinion about the most
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effective
medium.

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Many
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people
like
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television
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because
they can both hear the
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information
and
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see
in visual which is a great way to convey
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messages
to the mass
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people
. Almost all
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television
channels have their
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own
news programs and should there be a special
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event
in the country, most of the
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people
would
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watch
the
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show
and that
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makes
TV as
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effective
tools to deliver
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different
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messages
to the
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people
.
For example
, the Royal Wedding in the UK is
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watched
by millions of
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people
around the world, as they would not
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only
hear the news
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but
they
also
want to
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see
the bride and the maid and the whole festival.
However
,
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television
has its
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own
weakness as it is not mobile and
thus
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often
fail to reach
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people
. They are not easy to carry,
therefore
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people
could
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watch
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television
in certain places
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only
.

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Some
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people
like the
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radio
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because
of its mobility and way of delivering
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messages
to
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people
. Although
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a lot of
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people
consider it as
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old fashioned
, several
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people
still
prefer listening to the
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radio
for obtaining useful
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information
.
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A lot of
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people
are following the
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radio
while they are driving as they could
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get
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information
about the traffic condition or the weather forecast.
However
, the drawback is that
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people
who have problems with their hearing capability will have trouble in getting
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some
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information
from the radio.

Although several
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people
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think
that
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comics
are
mostly
for children,
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but
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many
adults
still
like reading
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comics
. As
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comic
conveys
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messages
in the form of stories and it attracts children and
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teenagers
,
therefore
it is an
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effective
tool for delivering
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important
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messages
to children and teens. Despite the
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positive
side, a
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comic
book has its
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own
drawbacks, as the cost of producing
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comics
is high and not all
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people
like to read it.

In my opinion, the most
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effective
media for communicating
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information
would be the
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radio
.
Even though
it has
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some
limitations,
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radio
is
still
the most beneficial tool
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because
of its mobility. These days,
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radios
are produced
in smaller sizes, such as the pocket
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radio
, which can
be carried
everywhere.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
50Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
408 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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